Some people believe that children should do what their parents tell them to do; others think children must learn to think for themselves. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.
Nowadays, people are divided in their opinion regarding whether children should make decisions by themselves or parents should support them. I wholeheartedly believe that in any life situation of the child, it is crucial for him to think on his own, and the decision should be made only by himself.
On the one hand, children should always obey and listen to parent’s advice, for there may occur any threatening situations. When the child plays outside, he should always be under the control of his parents. As an example, if parents do not take care of their child, he may be damaged by any stuff in the environment. Furthermore, there is no denying that children are too young to decide what is right and what is wrong. Due to their fragile and unformed psychology, they may commit many different actions which may harmfully influence their future development. Therefore, parents should always take care, control, and give useful advice.
On the other hand, it is vital for children to think on their own because it improves their logical skills. Many parents of prodigies say that children should learn to be individualistic and think critically in any challenging situation. Particularly, children should train their ability to think by solving a variety of complex problems connected with logic and real life. Moreover, if parents want their children to become independent and confident in the future, they should not give any tips in children’s life. By this method, the child learns to rely and trust only on himself. This will contribute to him become successful in the future. Hence, children should think about everything on their own.
In conclusion, compared to children who are always told what to do, children who think and act independently have better problem-solving skills and confidence, which will benefit them immensely when they face problems in life. Hence, I believe that children should be encouraged to think for themselves.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, furthermore, hence, if, may, moreover, regarding, so, therefore, in conclusion, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 17.0 7.85571142285 216% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 12.0 10.4138276553 115% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 7.30460921844 137% => OK
Pronoun: 35.0 24.0651302605 145% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 43.0 41.998997996 102% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1641.0 1615.20841683 102% => OK
No of words: 319.0 315.596192385 101% => OK
Chars per words: 5.14420062696 5.12529762239 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.22617688928 4.20363070211 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.79916767423 2.80592935109 100% => OK
Unique words: 171.0 176.041082164 97% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.53605015674 0.561755894193 95% => OK
syllable_count: 491.4 506.74238477 97% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 5.43587174349 166% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 16.0721442886 106% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 41.7037666434 49.4020404114 84% => OK
Chars per sentence: 96.5294117647 106.682146367 90% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.7647058824 20.7667163134 90% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.0 7.06120827912 85% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 5.01903807615 100% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 8.67935871743 127% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.428954412718 0.244688304435 175% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.147008056074 0.084324248473 174% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0900719251596 0.0667982634062 135% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.271496280918 0.151304729494 179% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.063516966891 0.056905535591 112% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.2 13.0946893788 93% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 61.67 50.2224549098 123% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 11.3001002004 81% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.53 12.4159519038 101% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.24 8.58950901804 96% => OK
difficult_words: 75.0 78.4519038076 96% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 9.78957915832 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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