money is one of the essential factors in promoting happiness. do you think people can be happy without much money? what other factors contribute towards happiness?
With the advent of technological advancement people relied on machine in order to make them comfortable, globalisation his made and compelled us have to focus on western culture and lifestyle for which people started doing more business and earn more and this thing has contributed a lot in promoting happiness in households, but apart from this many other factors are also quite important such as balanced and healthy life with family members.
Firstly, in 21st century where modernity seems to be an unending process people are working hard and have started many other means through which they could double their money, in order to maintain their lifestyle and a status quo in society they are earning more to have latest and unique technologies, education and style and they believed that this would exacerbates their happiness. Besides, this from last decades we have seen the trend of tourism where people prefer to visit other countries to see their culture, tradition, lifestyle and there places and this thing is also playing role in enhancing their happiness.
Secondly, having family and less jobs playing dynamic role in decreasing the level of stress and anxiety, because family and kids are the source of happiness in any home. People having less class have no desire of wearing brands or ea western, all they want is to live happy and joyful even if they are not having big source of earning. Thirdly, do not travel other place in order to make them happy they sit outside along with the relatives in open sky and enjoy their company fully stop finally, they are quite limited to their space and prefer to have their ancestor’s job such as cultivation and they remain very happy while doing occupation in their crop field’s police stop
In conclusion, money could good play more role in obtaining worldly materials which for time being gives them happiness but real joy lives in family having children family members give someone true level of satisfaction.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Suggestion: exacerbate
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, but, finally, first, firstly, if, second, secondly, so, third, thirdly, while, apart from, in conclusion, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 7.85571142285 38% => OK
Conjunction : 22.0 10.4138276553 211% => Less conjunction wanted
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 29.0 24.0651302605 121% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 42.0 41.998997996 100% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1653.0 1615.20841683 102% => OK
No of words: 330.0 315.596192385 105% => OK
Chars per words: 5.00909090909 5.12529762239 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.26214759535 4.20363070211 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.44877923523 2.80592935109 87% => OK
Unique words: 191.0 176.041082164 108% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.578787878788 0.561755894193 103% => OK
syllable_count: 518.4 506.74238477 102% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 6.0 16.0721442886 37% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 55.0 20.2975951904 271% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 149.436069571 49.4020404114 302% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 275.5 106.682146367 258% => Less chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 55.0 20.7667163134 265% => Less words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 21.3333333333 7.06120827912 302% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.176988969804 0.244688304435 72% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0888871573225 0.084324248473 105% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0468403631125 0.0667982634062 70% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.112273830847 0.151304729494 74% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.034562433512 0.056905535591 61% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 29.7 13.0946893788 227% => Automated_readability_index is high.
flesch_reading_ease: 15.65 50.2224549098 31% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 24.7 11.3001002004 219% => Flesch kincaid grade is high.
coleman_liau_index: 12.67 12.4159519038 102% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.67 8.58950901804 113% => OK
difficult_words: 69.0 78.4519038076 88% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 29.0 9.78957915832 296% => Linsear_write_formula is high.
gunning_fog: 24.0 10.1190380762 237% => Gunning_fog is high.
text_standard: 13.0 10.7795591182 121% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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