In terms of our survival, we humans, are undoubtedly dependent upon all living things, including animals and plants. One-forth of all animals and plant species are at risk of extinction, as many of them have wildy become extinct within the past decades.
Reports, which are based on academic papers and governmental documents, indicate that activities like farming, overfishing and mining have effects upon human life, environment and nature. Additionally, one might think that this is a major problem and that one's worst fears for the earth will materialize due to decreased vegetation. As a result, desertification may happen apart from the fact that deserts have their own plant and animal species. Presumably we should plant trees with the aim of halting reduction of plant species. By the end of the planned 70-year planting, for instance, we will have planted more than 4,500 kilometers of trees, known as the lungs of the earth. On top of that, one declaim that overhunting throughout the world results in a considerable reduction of species population. So the governments should put an end to this.
In conclusion, one of the profitable debates that should be considered amongst scientists is conservation efforts for preserving all animal and plant species. Therefore, in the not-far-distant future we will not have had a considerable impact on our lives. All creatures have undoubtedly been created for us but we have been seriously warned in all holy books to preserve these blessings and not to waste them.
- It is a natural process when animal species become extinct There is no reason why people should stop happening this Do you agree or disagree 78
- The graph shows Internet Usage in Taiwan by Age Group 1998 2000 78
- Some people think that technological progress has affected their lives To what extent do agree or disagree with the statement 56
- Due to effects of globalisation the cultures of some countries are influenced by others Some people think this is a natural process Others think this is a threat to cultural identity What is your opinion about this 84
- Some people argue that technological progress is always positive Others dispute this What is your view and why 80
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, if, may, so, therefore, apart from, for instance, in conclusion, as a result, on top of that
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 13.1623246493 61% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 21.0 24.0651302605 87% => OK
Preposition: 33.0 41.998997996 79% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.3376753507 108% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1293.0 1615.20841683 80% => OK
No of words: 244.0 315.596192385 77% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.29918032787 5.12529762239 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.95227774224 4.20363070211 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.26536997768 2.80592935109 116% => OK
Unique words: 155.0 176.041082164 88% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.635245901639 0.561755894193 113% => OK
syllable_count: 387.9 506.74238477 77% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 16.0721442886 62% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 24.0 20.2975951904 118% => OK
Sentence length SD: 51.4610532345 49.4020404114 104% => OK
Chars per sentence: 129.3 106.682146367 121% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.4 20.7667163134 117% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.7 7.06120827912 137% => OK
Paragraphs: 3.0 4.38176352705 68% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 4.0 5.01903807615 80% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 8.67935871743 46% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0941945641215 0.244688304435 38% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0369791485988 0.084324248473 44% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0393477338503 0.0667982634062 59% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0700979737153 0.151304729494 46% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0322982152734 0.056905535591 57% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.7 13.0946893788 120% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 47.12 50.2224549098 94% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.7 11.3001002004 112% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.76 12.4159519038 111% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.55 8.58950901804 111% => OK
difficult_words: 73.0 78.4519038076 93% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 15.5 9.78957915832 158% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.1190380762 115% => OK
text_standard: 16.0 10.7795591182 148% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Minimum 250 words wanted.
Minimum four paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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