Some people think that parents should teach their children how to be healthy and have a balanced diet. Others, however, believe that school is the best place to learn this. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.
Health-conscious has grown among the public due to its implication on human well-being, especially kids' health. Although many people believe that schools are the best place for children to learn how to stay healthy and have balanced diets, I show my preference for homeschooling in comparison to schools.
On the one hand, school education owns several sources for children learning how to live healthier and have a balanced diet. First, it is undeniable that children could get access to dig deeper into chemicals and nutrition in the class of Biology and Chemistry, which directly affect body state from foods. For example, teachers not only deliver knowledge of such topics but also give advice on food choices for students to have better mental and physical well-being based on their healthy nutrition. Second, thanks to regular assessments at schools, children are forced to comprehend and revise the lessons to get high scores. Therefore, they could memorize the lessons the longest way, laying a foundation for establishing their balanced diet in adulthood based on their academic knowledge.
On the other hand, I would like to agree that parents could be more contributive than schools in teaching their children to get to be hale and hearty. Initially, since parents are the ones who provide children with meals on daily basis, so they could naturally teach them by giving nutrition of the food they are consuming. It means that they could ensure these meals are nutritious and healthy for their children's consumption. Finally, as parents have a better understanding of their kids' health conditions than teachers, they could drive teachers' inclination to a healthy and balanced diet that suits best their children's health at certain development stages. For instance, if children are underweight, their parents will provide them with a diet rich in protein and starch, possibly adding additional foods that are conducive to children's digestive system as yogurt.
In conclusion, schools and parents both play essential roles in teaching children of a healthy lifestyle. However, from my perspective, parents could contribute greater than the school to a certain extend.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 7, column 199, Rule ID: SOME_EXTEND[1]
Message: Did you mean 'extent' ("extent" is a noun, "extend" is a verb)?
Suggestion: extent
...te greater than the school to a certain extend.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, finally, first, however, if, second, so, therefore, well, for example, for instance, in conclusion, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 10.4138276553 115% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 29.0 24.0651302605 121% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 46.0 41.998997996 110% => OK
Nominalization: 11.0 8.3376753507 132% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1841.0 1615.20841683 114% => OK
No of words: 345.0 315.596192385 109% => OK
Chars per words: 5.33623188406 5.12529762239 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.3097767484 4.20363070211 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.77809718811 2.80592935109 99% => OK
Unique words: 196.0 176.041082164 111% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.568115942029 0.561755894193 101% => OK
syllable_count: 533.7 506.74238477 105% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 24.0 20.2975951904 118% => OK
Sentence length SD: 42.0398256273 49.4020404114 85% => OK
Chars per sentence: 131.5 106.682146367 123% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.6428571429 20.7667163134 119% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.14285714286 7.06120827912 129% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.32854438278 0.244688304435 134% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.118037692086 0.084324248473 140% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0784655104002 0.0667982634062 117% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.196850432652 0.151304729494 130% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0293779686587 0.056905535591 52% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.0 13.0946893788 122% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 55.58 50.2224549098 111% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 11.3001002004 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.99 12.4159519038 113% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.08 8.58950901804 106% => OK
difficult_words: 93.0 78.4519038076 119% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.0 9.78957915832 143% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.1190380762 115% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.7795591182 130% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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