the percentage of illiterate people

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the percentage of illiterate people

The chart gives information about the estimated number of people who were untaught in the world according to different regions and gender in 2000.
Overall, it can clearly be seen that there were more illiterate women than those of men in all areas, with the exception of Sub Saharan Africa where males were less educated than females. Besides that, South Asia had the highest illiteracy rates in women, whereas developed countries had the lowest ones.
Looking at the estimated percentage of people who were ignorant in developed countries, men stood at 2%, while women experienced 1% made. This proportion in Latin America and the Caribbean represented 10% in males and about 12% in females of the total. Next, the lack of education of men in East Asia and Oceania accounted for 8%, which was lower than that of women, at 20%.
Turning to the illiteracy rates in Sub Saharan Africa, the number of uneducated males was significantly higher than women. While unschooled females peaked at approximately 50%, this proportion in males was just 30%. In Arab States, this phenomenon was opposite to Sub Saharan Africa. There were more males who were educated than females, which accounted for 29% of illiterate males but more than 50% females ones. Men in South Asia who were illiterate accounted for just over 30% and women recorded about 56%, which was the highest.

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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 103, Rule ID: WITH_THE_EXCEPTION_OF[1]
Message: Use simply 'except' or 'except for'
Suggestion: except; except for
...e women than those of men in all areas, with the exception of Sub Saharan Africa where males were les...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
besides, but, if, look, so, whereas, while

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 7.0 186% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 1.00243902439 100% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 6.8 88% => OK
Relative clauses : 11.0 3.15609756098 349% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 8.0 5.60731707317 143% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 37.0 33.7804878049 110% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 3.97073170732 126% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1140.0 965.302439024 118% => OK
No of words: 228.0 196.424390244 116% => OK
Chars per words: 5.0 4.92477711251 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.88582923847 3.73543355544 104% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.52159036617 2.65546596893 95% => OK
Unique words: 120.0 106.607317073 113% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.526315789474 0.547539520022 96% => OK
syllable_count: 366.3 283.868780488 129% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.45097560976 110% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 1.53170731707 261% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 3.0 4.33902439024 69% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.07073170732 187% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 3.36585365854 119% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 8.94146341463 123% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 22.4926829268 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 28.7821684927 43.030603864 67% => OK
Chars per sentence: 103.636363636 112.824112599 92% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.7272727273 22.9334400587 90% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.81818181818 5.23603664747 73% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 1.69756097561 59% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 2.0 3.70975609756 54% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 1.13902439024 351% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 4.09268292683 122% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.114166021311 0.215688989381 53% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0406165303023 0.103423049105 39% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0521293692602 0.0843802449381 62% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0697175904667 0.15604864568 45% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0204728599209 0.0819641961636 25% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.5 13.2329268293 94% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 51.18 61.2550243902 84% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 10.3012195122 108% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.72 11.4140731707 103% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.85 8.06136585366 110% => OK
difficult_words: 61.0 40.7170731707 150% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 11.4329268293 105% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.9970731707 91% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 11.0658536585 108% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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