The internet and technology, like mobile phones and laptops, are connecting us to each other every hour of the day via networking sites and applications. Do you think it’s an advantage or disadvantage?
Explain your answer. Use specific reasons and details to support your answer.
There is no doubt, in past 2 decades great advancements were achieved in technical field by human beings, due to this nowadays, we stay tuned with each other, 24 hours of the day with the help of social media sites like whatsaap and so on; moreover I strongly belive, this is a positive development.
To start with, the benifits of this upgradation. First and foremost, it not only make communication easy but also very fast. To elaborate, in the past time if, someone wanted to contact with somebody who live far from from him and her in order to do so, then he or she have to send hand written latter by post which take many days to reach to the receiver and feedback also have to follow the same procedure; however in this moder world an individual can communicate with other within some seconds with the help of internet and mobile phones for example anybody can send or receive messages from there near and dear ones with on application like Instagram, Facebook and so on. Thus this made interaction of the people very simple.
Moreover, this thing also helps everyone to know about there close ones, what they are doing, is they are safe or not. For instant, through this advancement masses can keep an eye on they near and dear ones due to, they are in contact with each other 24/7. In addition, in the present scenario, it is quite normal to update status about what people are doing and what they will do, through this there family and friends can easily get information about they daily life as well as they can talk to each other when needed. Furthermore, this also bring revolution in is relationship management. Now individuals can get to know other people through the different sites and then they can met up, something they even find they soulmate on this type of sites.
In conclusion, they is not a second thought about technology being a god gift to everyone. As, it is helpfull to make connections with other and with the usage of this people can figure out about there close ones and can make new friends frends.
| Post date | Users | Rates | Link to Content |
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| 2021-05-30 | Sumit mirdha | 87 | view |
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Did you mean 'pastime'?
Suggestion: pastime
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a word
Suggestion: from
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Message: The pronoun 'she' must be used with a third-person verb: 'has'.
Suggestion: has
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Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Thus,
...ion like Instagram, Facebook and so on. Thus this made interaction of the people ver...
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Message: The verb 'can' requires the base form of the verb: 'meet'
Suggestion: meet
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Message: The pronoun 'they' must be used with a non-third-person form of a verb: 'be'
Suggestion: be
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Line 7, column 164, Rule ID: THIS_NNS[1]
Message: Did you mean 'these'?
Suggestion: these
...ctions with other and with the usage of this people can figure out about there close...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, furthermore, however, if, moreover, second, so, then, thus, well, for example, in addition, in conclusion, no doubt, as well as, to start with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 7.85571142285 127% => OK
Conjunction : 17.0 10.4138276553 163% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 7.30460921844 41% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 31.0 24.0651302605 129% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 70.0 41.998997996 167% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 8.3376753507 120% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1678.0 1615.20841683 104% => OK
No of words: 364.0 315.596192385 115% => OK
Chars per words: 4.60989010989 5.12529762239 90% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.36792674256 4.20363070211 104% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.40583434263 2.80592935109 86% => OK
Unique words: 208.0 176.041082164 118% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.571428571429 0.561755894193 102% => OK
syllable_count: 525.6 506.74238477 104% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.60771543086 87% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 5.43587174349 166% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 9.0 4.76152304609 189% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 30.0 20.2975951904 148% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 138.008957036 49.4020404114 279% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 139.833333333 106.682146367 131% => OK
Words per sentence: 30.3333333333 20.7667163134 146% => OK
Discourse Markers: 13.3333333333 7.06120827912 189% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 7.0 5.01903807615 139% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.101019365202 0.244688304435 41% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0332750139168 0.084324248473 39% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0335676805768 0.0667982634062 50% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.067139378407 0.151304729494 44% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0181664939176 0.056905535591 32% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.4 13.0946893788 118% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 57.95 50.2224549098 115% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.6 11.3001002004 112% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.05 12.4159519038 81% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.16 8.58950901804 95% => OK
difficult_words: 70.0 78.4519038076 89% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.0 9.78957915832 143% => OK
gunning_fog: 14.0 10.1190380762 138% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.7795591182 130% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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