Some people advocate death penalty for those who committed violent crimes. Others say that death penalty is unacceptable in contemporary society. Discuss both views and give your opinion
The matter of crime and punishment has always been a highly debatable issue in a number of countries. Some believe death sentence is an appropriate penalty for criminals convicted of murder or acts of terrorism, while others are assured that such measures should not be implemented in the modern world. Although capital punishment is supposed to be effective offense prevention mechanism, I am still convinced that the use of this practice is exposed to fatal errors of judgment.
On the one hand, death penalty is the safest way (avenue) to keep dangerous offenders away from society.(death penalty serves as a deterrent mechanism in warding off This is because criminal history knows hundreds of cases when the unchained felons continued their illegal activities after their release or escape from jail. Moreover, the societies where executions are implemented appear to be more secure since the potential law-breakers are deterred with the possibility of the harsh perspective.
For instance, in 2016 the US National Bureau of Statistics reported that the American states that had not been using the capital punishment suffered from twice as many terroristic attacks as compared to the ones where executions had been allowed. In other words, the security of the tool is its indisputable advantage.
On the other hand, death penalty is considered to be a highly contradictory instrument. The thing is that, unlike other judicial decisions, lethal injections or electric chair executions are impossible to cancel once implemented. Therefore, each time a court happens to make an erroneous conclusion in a brutal crime case, an innocent person gets sentenced to death. Hence, this kind of punishment does not imply any correction of mistakes. For example, a recent article of “Boston Spotlight” shed the light upon the story of John Macnamarra who was wrongfully sentenced to death in 1986 due to the corrupted investigators. Thus, the price society pays for executions is too significant to afford.
In conclusion, even though arguments in favour of capital punishment also look persuasive, I still believe such measure should be banned in the today’s society.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, hence, if, look, moreover, so, still, therefore, thus, while, for example, for instance, in conclusion, kind of, in other words, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 22.0 13.1623246493 167% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 7.85571142285 25% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 10.4138276553 38% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 14.0 24.0651302605 58% => OK
Preposition: 47.0 41.998997996 112% => OK
Nominalization: 11.0 8.3376753507 132% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1835.0 1615.20841683 114% => OK
No of words: 342.0 315.596192385 108% => OK
Chars per words: 5.36549707602 5.12529762239 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.30037696126 4.20363070211 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.96680476414 2.80592935109 106% => OK
Unique words: 214.0 176.041082164 122% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.625730994152 0.561755894193 111% => OK
syllable_count: 581.4 506.74238477 115% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 7.0 2.52805611222 277% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 24.0 20.2975951904 118% => OK
Sentence length SD: 69.9864418357 49.4020404114 142% => OK
Chars per sentence: 131.071428571 106.682146367 123% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.4285714286 20.7667163134 118% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.8571428571 7.06120827912 154% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 2.0 8.67935871743 23% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 12.0 3.9879759519 301% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.189656724958 0.244688304435 78% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0602404477032 0.084324248473 71% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.059591254153 0.0667982634062 89% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0890458726148 0.151304729494 59% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0640637676259 0.056905535591 113% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.1 13.0946893788 123% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 38.66 50.2224549098 77% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.8 11.3001002004 122% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.16 12.4159519038 114% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.72 8.58950901804 113% => OK
difficult_words: 106.0 78.4519038076 135% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 13.5 9.78957915832 138% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.1190380762 115% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.7795591182 130% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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