You and your family are living in rented accommodation in an English-speaking country. You are not satisfied with the condition of some of the furniture.
Write a letter to your landlord. In your letter
introduce yourself
explain what is wrong with the furniture
say what action you would like the landlord to take
Dear Mr. Solomons,
I hope you and your family are doing well and healthy in this post-Covid world. I have shifted to your apartment on a rental basis by signing a rental lease agreement for a year.
My name is Shwatank Bhasin, and I came from India along with my family to explore new opportunities in my professional career. I work as a Software Engineer with the Oracle Corporation Private Limited company in Toronto. My wife is also in the same profession and my mother is a Homeopathic Doctor.
During the time of shifting to your place, I came across some adverse conditions of your house. One of them is the furniture of your living room which needs to be replaced because it is antiquated and ancient. Due to this, the quality of your sofas in the living room has become destitute. Another problem is with the kitchen roof which has multiple water leakage.
Therefore, I urge you to please fix the roof and replace your old furniture from your apartment. If there is any trouble in buying new furniture, you can also rent the furniture from the companies who are providing furniture on a monthly rental basis to their customers. I would be grateful if you will quickly respond to this problem.
I am looking forward to your prompt response.
Yours faithfully,
Shain
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, if, look, so, therefore, well
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 7.48453608247 147% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 4.92783505155 61% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 5.05154639175 119% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.03092783505 99% => OK
Pronoun: 33.0 32.9175257732 100% => OK
Preposition: 31.0 26.3917525773 117% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 3.85567010309 104% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1070.0 937.175257732 114% => OK
No of words: 224.0 206.0 109% => OK
Chars per words: 4.77678571429 4.54256449028 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.86867284054 3.78020617076 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.64761877998 2.54303337028 104% => OK
Unique words: 136.0 127.690721649 107% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.607142857143 0.622605031667 98% => OK
syllable_count: 339.3 290.88556701 117% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.41237113402 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 11.0 9.13402061856 120% => OK
Article: 1.0 0.824742268041 121% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.463917525773 216% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 12.6804123711 110% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 16.3608247423 98% => OK
Sentence length SD: 34.4048525291 44.8134815571 77% => OK
Chars per sentence: 76.4285714286 76.5299724578 100% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.0 16.8248392259 95% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.5 4.34317383033 58% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 2.54639175258 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 7.41237113402 67% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 1.49484536082 334% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.94845360825 101% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.312998877972 0.216113520407 145% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.104609193088 0.0766984524023 136% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0611967110848 0.0603063233224 101% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.153166526889 0.12726935374 120% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0664675830407 0.0580467560999 115% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.1 8.37731958763 109% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 63.7 70.7449484536 90% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.4 7.45979381443 113% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.15 8.71597938144 116% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.03 7.59969072165 106% => OK
difficult_words: 51.0 41.2886597938 124% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 8.62886597938 93% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 8.54432989691 98% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 8.15463917526 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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