You recently celebrated a special occasion in your personal life and received a card and a present from your colleagues at work. Write a letter to your colleagues.
In your letter:
remind your colleagues what the special occasion you were celebrating was
thank them for the card and gift
explain why you like the gift and how you will use it
Dear Amy and Jack,
I am writing to express my gratitude for the wonderful present and the beautiful card which you have sent me on my wedding anniversary.
With regard to the special occasion, I would like to remind you that it was my first wedding anniversary and to make it more memorable, my husband and I wanted to celebrate it along with the other family members. As for the venue for this auspicious day, we have chosen the most prominent hotel "The Taj".
The gift in the question was one of the most amazing presents I have ever got and I honestly liked it. When I finally unwrapped it, it took me aback by its wonderful design and unique concept. In fact, it was such a nice gesture from both of you and I do not have many words to thank you.
As I said, my better half and I liked it very much, because of its special features like a musical fountain with a rotating photo frame. This we are definitely going to keep in our master bedroom on the bedside table. Not only would this give an elegant look to our room, but it also reminds me of you both.
I would like to thank you once again for your best wishes and this lovely present.
Yours sincerely,
Tracy
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, finally, first, honestly, if, look, so, as for, in fact, mind you, with regard to
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 4.0 7.48453608247 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 4.92783505155 61% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 5.05154639175 198% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.03092783505 99% => OK
Pronoun: 46.0 32.9175257732 140% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 26.0 26.3917525773 99% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 3.85567010309 26% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 978.0 937.175257732 104% => OK
No of words: 222.0 206.0 108% => OK
Chars per words: 4.40540540541 4.54256449028 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.8600083453 3.78020617076 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.32451636891 2.54303337028 91% => OK
Unique words: 136.0 127.690721649 107% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.612612612613 0.622605031667 98% => OK
syllable_count: 311.4 290.88556701 107% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 10.0 9.13402061856 109% => OK
Article: 2.0 0.824742268041 243% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 4.0 1.83505154639 218% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.463917525773 216% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 3.0 1.44329896907 208% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 12.6804123711 87% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 16.3608247423 122% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 46.327793632 44.8134815571 103% => OK
Chars per sentence: 88.9090909091 76.5299724578 116% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.1818181818 16.8248392259 120% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.36363636364 4.34317383033 193% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 2.54639175258 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 7.41237113402 148% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.49484536082 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.94845360825 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.166478234315 0.216113520407 77% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0691870236483 0.0766984524023 90% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0665862513676 0.0603063233224 110% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0861988128813 0.12726935374 68% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0394816917361 0.0580467560999 68% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.4 8.37731958763 112% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 68.1 70.7449484536 96% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.7 7.45979381443 117% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.3 8.71597938144 95% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.4 7.59969072165 97% => OK
difficult_words: 39.0 41.2886597938 94% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 13.5 8.62886597938 156% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 8.54432989691 117% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 8.15463917526 110% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.