In some countries owning a home rather than renting one is considered very important. Why might this be the case? Is this a positive or negative development?
In today's world, people are getting more independent ant and active lifestyle as well as the aspiration for their own asset. As a result, the majority of people wish to possess their own private house rather than a renting one. From my point of view, there are a myriad of rationals for this trend and the benefits seem to outweigh the drawbacks.
There are obvious reasons why people prefer having their own house to renting one. The first thing to notice is that possessing a real asset can reassure their financial backup. The owners will not have to worry about the monthly payment if they rent a home as well as the contract deal with the host. A house can also be used as a mortgage in case the owner is in emergency situation requiring huge amount of money. Another thing is that it is deemed to be successful if someone can purchase their own horse. People in this day age are living in an independant world with big ego and that ingrained mindset. They would love to appear successfully and proudly in front of their friends, family and the like with a house belonging to them.
However, there are, to some extent, several negative aspects of this trend.One thing worth considering is that most people cannot pay the money in one turn, so buying on credit will be the solution. If that person cannot pay back the debt and interest on time, their financial condition will soon go to a spiral downward. At that time, the real stress curtails all the efforts. Moreover, people will have to pay bigger tax as they are proven to be financially capable. The governments will notice them with their real estate, thus change them more money to the state budget.
In conclusion, although there are undeniable disadvantages of not renting a house, I am convinced that there are justifiable reasons for buying a house, including the financial assurance, satisfaction of a person with big ego and not having to pay monthly payment, which is even bigger than the price of owning a house collectively.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Suggestion: .
...ill have to pay higher insurance and tax . The hosts will have to relinquish a wea...
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Message: Possible agreement error. Did you mean 'myriads'?
Suggestion: myriads
...for that. In conclusion, there are a myriad of reasons why people highly prefer own...
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...eavier responsibility and more tax fees,
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, however, if, nevertheless, so, another thing, as to, for example, i reckon, in conclusion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 7.85571142285 140% => OK
Conjunction : 16.0 10.4138276553 154% => OK
Relative clauses : 20.0 7.30460921844 274% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 50.0 24.0651302605 208% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 60.0 41.998997996 143% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2125.0 1615.20841683 132% => OK
No of words: 466.0 315.596192385 148% => Less content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.56008583691 5.12529762239 89% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.64618479453 4.20363070211 111% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.45060703277 2.80592935109 87% => OK
Unique words: 226.0 176.041082164 128% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.484978540773 0.561755894193 86% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 673.2 506.74238477 133% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.60771543086 87% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 10.0 5.43587174349 184% => OK
Article: 5.0 2.52805611222 198% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 20.0 16.0721442886 124% => OK
Sentence length: 23.0 20.2975951904 113% => OK
Sentence length SD: 34.922628767 49.4020404114 71% => OK
Chars per sentence: 106.25 106.682146367 100% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.3 20.7667163134 112% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.05 7.06120827912 72% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 13.0 8.67935871743 150% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.155098690997 0.244688304435 63% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0561426469247 0.084324248473 67% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0508683481207 0.0667982634062 76% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.128596369812 0.151304729494 85% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0628820720075 0.056905535591 111% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.7 13.0946893788 89% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 65.05 50.2224549098 130% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 11.3001002004 88% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.46 12.4159519038 76% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.06 8.58950901804 94% => OK
difficult_words: 97.0 78.4519038076 124% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 9.78957915832 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.1190380762 111% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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