In some countries owning a home rather than renting one is considered very important. Why might this be the case? Is this a positive or negative development?
Some people think that having a house on their own is better than renting one. There are many reasons for this school of thought and personally, I believe that whether this is a positive or negative trend depends on certain circumstances.
People consider owning a house is much more important than renting one because a house can show their wealth and status in society. It is clear that buying a house require a huge amount of money, especially in metropolises. A self-owned house also presents the characteristic of a person, which is expressed through the color of the wall, the way the owner arranges the furniture... In addition, people owning a house can feel more comfortable as they have not to worry about the landlord nor do they have to pay a monthly rent.
All in all, I think that owning a house could be both positive and negative trend when it is considered in different contexts. For people who have good financial potential, owning a house would be a best choice for them as it could be an asset for further investment. Besides that, if people set owning a house as a goal, it will motivate them to work hard and save money, which keeping them energizing every day to achieve goal. However, for those who do not have enough finance, stocking up on a house could make them end up piling up debt and pay a huge amount of interest monthly.
To sum up, people have many reasons to own a house and it would be an upward trend if everyone know how to control their finance and find a suitable way to enjoy life.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 198, Rule ID: THE_SUPERLATIVE[1]
Message: Use 'the' with the superlative.
Suggestion: the
...cial potential, owning a house would be a best choice for them as it could be an ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, however, if, so, i think, in addition, to sum up
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 7.30460921844 137% => OK
Pronoun: 24.0 24.0651302605 100% => OK
Preposition: 28.0 41.998997996 67% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1258.0 1615.20841683 78% => OK
No of words: 277.0 315.596192385 88% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.54151624549 5.12529762239 89% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.07962216107 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.53155353683 2.80592935109 90% => OK
Unique words: 150.0 176.041082164 85% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.541516245487 0.561755894193 96% => OK
syllable_count: 400.5 506.74238477 79% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.60771543086 87% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 16.0721442886 68% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 25.0 20.2975951904 123% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 27.8244199779 49.4020404114 56% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 114.363636364 106.682146367 107% => OK
Words per sentence: 25.1818181818 20.7667163134 121% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.72727272727 7.06120827912 81% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.181741800529 0.244688304435 74% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0817353739056 0.084324248473 97% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0724104862161 0.0667982634062 108% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.130669842974 0.151304729494 86% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0900825223295 0.056905535591 158% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.5 13.0946893788 95% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 63.02 50.2224549098 125% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 11.3001002004 95% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.35 12.4159519038 75% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.56 8.58950901804 88% => OK
difficult_words: 47.0 78.4519038076 60% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.0 10.1190380762 119% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.