People think that government should increase the cost of fuel for cars and other vehicles to solve environmental problems. Give your opinion
It is widely believed that the cost of fuel for cars and other vehicles should be increased by the authorities to address the environmental issues. While this policy might have a positive impact on the environment, I would argue other measures could have greater effects.
On the one hand, the measure of rising the fuel cost for private vehicles could bring enormous advantages. Firstly, the number of people using personal cars would be limited due to the high cost of fuel. As a result, the exhausted fumes emitted from these vehicles could be declined, thereby reducing the greenhouse effect. Secondly, the increased cost of fuel could be used for expanding and developing the public transport infrastructure as numerous people are still in need for travelling to different places.
On the other hand, while the rising cost of fuel gas might be only a stopgap measure, there are several solutions to solve environmental problems in long term. To be more specifically, the local authorities could offer free bus and train tickets to encourage people to use public transport. London transport system, for instance, has introduced the congestion charges for people visiting the city center. Therefore, these new policies may also have similar impact like the increased cost of fuel, that is, to cut down on emissions as fewer people use private vehicles.
In conclusion, despite the fact that increasing the cost of fuel for personal vehicles could be the environmentally-friendly policy, other measures might be effective in addressing the environmental issues in the longer term.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 149, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “While” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...es to address the environmental issues. While this policy might have a positive impac...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, firstly, if, may, second, secondly, so, still, therefore, while, for instance, in conclusion, as a result, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 14.0 7.85571142285 178% => OK
Conjunction : 3.0 10.4138276553 29% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 3.0 7.30460921844 41% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 8.0 24.0651302605 33% => OK
Preposition: 30.0 41.998997996 71% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 8.3376753507 36% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1331.0 1615.20841683 82% => OK
No of words: 254.0 315.596192385 80% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.24015748031 5.12529762239 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.99216450694 4.20363070211 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.99020089335 2.80592935109 107% => OK
Unique words: 141.0 176.041082164 80% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.555118110236 0.561755894193 99% => OK
syllable_count: 416.7 506.74238477 82% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 5.0 2.52805611222 198% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 46.6627230477 49.4020404114 94% => OK
Chars per sentence: 110.916666667 106.682146367 104% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.1666666667 20.7667163134 102% => OK
Discourse Markers: 11.4166666667 7.06120827912 162% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.359049487058 0.244688304435 147% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.142086933737 0.084324248473 169% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.100869620164 0.0667982634062 151% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.245322788095 0.151304729494 162% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0251789810414 0.056905535591 44% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.8 13.0946893788 105% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 50.16 50.2224549098 100% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 11.3001002004 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.11 12.4159519038 106% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.09 8.58950901804 106% => OK
difficult_words: 71.0 78.4519038076 91% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.7795591182 130% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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