Some scientists think that there are intelligent life from on other planets and messages should be sent to contact them. Other scientists think it is a bad idea and should be dangerous. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.
The question of alien existence has always fascinated people. Some scientists believe that humankind should contact the so-called extraterrestrial creatures, while others do not advocate this controversial idea. It seems both groups have their logic. However, in my opinion, the benefits outweigh the drawbacks.
To begin with, finding life beyond our only habitable planet could be the most significant discovery of all time. The dream of this, indeed, has been with humankind since time immemorial. Whether scientists are capable of communicating with alien life or not is still limited to theory. However, due to new scientific observations by NASA's largest telescopes, our nearest star, the sun, will not eternally last. This understanding has urged the physicists to do their best in order to discover a substitution place that is able to sustain life as we know of.
On the other hand, this phenomenon is not deemed to be without risk by some experts. The main reason for being against this idea is that the messages received by them could result in devastating repercussions. To explain more, it is pretty vague what kinds of creatures we would be facing; consequently, it could be the biggest threat to humans. Besides, how precisely we will convey our thoughts is a severe point of contention since their way of communication would differ.
In conclusion, the discovery of alien life itself would be the most significant turning point throughout history, let alone send and receive messages. As time passes, mankind takes further steps to this life-changing event with the existence of advanced technologies, and I, for one, cannot wait to see that day.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 335, Rule ID: THE_SUPERLATIVE[2]
Message: A determiner is probably missing here: 'NASAs the largest'.
Suggestion: NASAs the largest
..., due to new scientific observations by NASAs largest telescopes, our nearest star, the sun, ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
besides, consequently, however, if, so, still, while, in conclusion, in my opinion, to begin with, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 13.1623246493 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 7.85571142285 127% => OK
Conjunction : 3.0 10.4138276553 29% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 26.0 24.0651302605 108% => OK
Preposition: 39.0 41.998997996 93% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1404.0 1615.20841683 87% => OK
No of words: 268.0 315.596192385 85% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.23880597015 5.12529762239 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.04607285448 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.95230143453 2.80592935109 105% => OK
Unique words: 174.0 176.041082164 99% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.649253731343 0.561755894193 116% => OK
syllable_count: 423.9 506.74238477 84% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 6.0 2.52805611222 237% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.2975951904 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 37.1280067993 49.4020404114 75% => OK
Chars per sentence: 93.6 106.682146367 88% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.8666666667 20.7667163134 86% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.73333333333 7.06120827912 110% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.201390763612 0.244688304435 82% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0605469697849 0.084324248473 72% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0615332971736 0.0667982634062 92% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.115804494048 0.151304729494 77% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0512953954399 0.056905535591 90% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.2 13.0946893788 93% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 54.22 50.2224549098 108% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 11.3001002004 88% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.82 12.4159519038 103% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.96 8.58950901804 104% => OK
difficult_words: 76.0 78.4519038076 97% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 9.78957915832 66% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.1190380762 87% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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