The charts show air pollution levels by different causes among four countries in 2021.
Summaries the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant
A glance at the charts provided reveals the percentage of air pollution caused by electricity generation, transport, and industry in specific countries in 2021, namely China, America, Japan, and Australia.
Overall, it is clear that there are variations in the levels of air pollution among the four nations and China occupied the greatest proportion of air containing high levels of pollutants in almost all sections.
In detail, the main source that leads to air pollution in China is industry, at 80 ppm, being 10 ppm higher than the figure for transport, which is the second-highest among the four countries, and having the highest rate of pollutants in the air generated by electricity, at exactly 60 ppm. Americans pay more attention to transport than the other activity, being the most noticeable ratio in America, at 60 ppm, nearly double that of transport and electricity generation, at 30 ppm for both, with the figure for transportation being half of that of China. In marked contrast to China, the proportions of Australia are almost the same, at around 20 ppm, accounting by far the lowest levels of air pollution compared to the others, with the transport rate being at nearly one-third that of America and the statistic for the industry is twice as low as that of Japan. Japan witnesses a similar trend with China, with the industry being the primary source of contamination, followed by the amount of air pollution caused by shipping and generating electricity, at 30 ppm and 15 ppm respectively.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
if, second, so, third
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 7.0 157% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 6.8 118% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 3.15609756098 222% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 7.0 5.60731707317 125% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 47.0 33.7804878049 139% => OK
Nominalization: 11.0 3.97073170732 277% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1268.0 965.302439024 131% => OK
No of words: 251.0 196.424390244 128% => OK
Chars per words: 5.05179282869 4.92477711251 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.98032404683 3.73543355544 107% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.93956415883 2.65546596893 111% => OK
Unique words: 124.0 106.607317073 116% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.494023904382 0.547539520022 90% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 378.9 283.868780488 133% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.45097560976 103% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 1.53170731707 65% => OK
Article: 3.0 4.33902439024 69% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.07073170732 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 3.0 0.482926829268 621% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 11.0 3.36585365854 327% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 6.0 8.94146341463 67% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 41.0 22.4926829268 182% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 39.3845006175 43.030603864 92% => OK
Chars per sentence: 211.333333333 112.824112599 187% => OK
Words per sentence: 41.8333333333 22.9334400587 182% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.5 5.23603664747 67% => OK
Paragraphs: 3.0 3.83414634146 78% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 0.0 1.69756097561 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 2.0 3.70975609756 54% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 1.13902439024 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.09268292683 49% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.157269734882 0.215688989381 73% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.104082903773 0.103423049105 101% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0709375558924 0.0843802449381 84% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.154729764347 0.15604864568 99% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0515494279214 0.0819641961636 63% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 23.3 13.2329268293 176% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 38.32 61.2550243902 63% => OK
smog_index: 13.0 6.51609756098 200% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 18.1 10.3012195122 176% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.9 11.4140731707 113% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.57 8.06136585366 119% => OK
difficult_words: 62.0 40.7170731707 152% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 18.0 11.4329268293 157% => OK
gunning_fog: 18.4 10.9970731707 167% => OK
text_standard: 18.0 11.0658536585 163% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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