It is irrefutable that home is the basic need of an individual. Although, there are various types of houses. In that case, some people choose to live in apartments, while others feels uncomfortable living in apartment. In my opinion, merits of this outweigh the drawbacks.
Firstly, apartments are usually small as compare to other types of houses. But, the most primary advantage of living in apartments is that it gives a personal space to an individual. Secondly, the owner can have private pool, garden and playground in the apartment itself. For instance, several professional swimmers choose to built pool in the apartment which helps them to practice regularly. In addition, in most of the apartments there are almost all the facilities which can be use on a daily basis and also it raises the standard of living of the stayers.
On the other hand, there are few demerits as well. First and foremost is high range of price. However, many people do not live in the apartments only due to the fact that its huge price. In addition, several apartments are compact because of which people feels suffocate and uneasy. For example, if the joint families lives in the apartment members might feel uncomfortable because of not having enough space and privacy.
To conclude, even though there are few disadvantages, merits are more and also outweigh the Cons.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 65, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “Although” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...ome is the basic need of an individual. Although, there are various types of houses. In ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, however, if, second, secondly, so, well, while, for example, for instance, in addition, in my opinion, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 10.4138276553 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 12.0 24.0651302605 50% => OK
Preposition: 32.0 41.998997996 76% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1142.0 1615.20841683 71% => OK
No of words: 228.0 315.596192385 72% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.00877192982 5.12529762239 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.88582923847 4.20363070211 92% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.71251275647 2.80592935109 97% => OK
Unique words: 128.0 176.041082164 73% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.561403508772 0.561755894193 100% => OK
syllable_count: 361.8 506.74238477 71% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 5.43587174349 18% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 20.2975951904 74% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 35.219060496 49.4020404114 71% => OK
Chars per sentence: 76.1333333333 106.682146367 71% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.2 20.7667163134 73% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.8 7.06120827912 139% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 3.4128256513 205% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.363011714727 0.244688304435 148% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.102838342949 0.084324248473 122% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0798509558803 0.0667982634062 120% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.180581539418 0.151304729494 119% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0908132042503 0.056905535591 160% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.8 13.0946893788 75% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 56.25 50.2224549098 112% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 11.3001002004 81% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.19 12.4159519038 90% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.64 8.58950901804 89% => OK
difficult_words: 47.0 78.4519038076 60% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 6.0 9.78957915832 61% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 10.1190380762 79% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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