In Modern days, Individuals are moving to distant places for their various reasons..Although there are disadvantages with this idea .There are surplus o. advantages associated with such decision.
People migrate to different places for Studies, Education, Employment and settlement .When an individual goes to different countries they they should face all the challenges alone .Thus, it helps the person to stay stubborn mentally and accept all odd situations in the life. In addition, Different places helps the person to understand various cultures and foods; Thus making him to accept all traditions globally . In addition, Generally people migrate to different countries to earn more money as the same person may not have the scope to earn in his nation.
There are also negatives associated with migration. Initially, Person may feel lonely in the new country as there is no one to talk to him and give adequate moral support. Moreover, Person may completely forget the original traditions and cultures of his country. Furthermore, When the educated people from village are migrating to other countries, the rural areas become dumb with no proper technological developments .On the other hand, Urban areas become more messy because their population exceeds the capacity,
To Summarize, Though there are disadvantages associated with migration; Nevertheless, There are plethora of positive factors associated with it.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, furthermore, if, may, moreover, nevertheless, so, thus, in addition, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 13.1623246493 61% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 10.4138276553 48% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 2.0 7.30460921844 27% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 11.0 24.0651302605 46% => OK
Preposition: 29.0 41.998997996 69% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1221.0 1615.20841683 76% => OK
No of words: 217.0 315.596192385 69% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.6267281106 5.12529762239 110% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.8380880478 4.20363070211 91% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.94481479564 2.80592935109 105% => OK
Unique words: 131.0 176.041082164 74% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.603686635945 0.561755894193 107% => OK
syllable_count: 383.4 506.74238477 76% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.8 1.60771543086 112% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 5.43587174349 18% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 16.0721442886 56% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 24.0 20.2975951904 118% => OK
Sentence length SD: 108.263054127 49.4020404114 219% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 135.666666667 106.682146367 127% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.1111111111 20.7667163134 116% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.2222222222 7.06120827912 145% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 23.0 5.01903807615 458% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 8.67935871743 35% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.144503466911 0.244688304435 59% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0472593022509 0.084324248473 56% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.046406228805 0.0667982634062 69% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0760359928611 0.151304729494 50% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0366237053183 0.056905535591 64% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 17.1 13.0946893788 131% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 30.2 50.2224549098 60% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 15.0 11.3001002004 133% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 15.67 12.4159519038 126% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.12 8.58950901804 106% => OK
difficult_words: 59.0 78.4519038076 75% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 9.78957915832 117% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.1190380762 115% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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