More and more couples are deciding to be "child-free", to have no children, in other words. Some people claim that those couples reach this conclusion through entirely selfish reasons. While others think that they came to this decision through noble motives, such as concern about overpopulation and desire for independence. Discuss both views and give your opinion.
There has been an increase in the number of couples who decide to not have children. While many people argue that those people are being selfish in making such decision, I think that this action is understandable for multiple reasons.
Firstly, from the view of a couple who wants to be child-free, the most common argument might be that raising a child is too expensive. Having children is not only feeding them and giving them a shelter to stay, but also providing them with education and a safe place to develop. Another important factor is that children need a lot of emotional support from their parents, which includes loving, caring, communicating and so many more. People who were mistreated, abused and felt un-valued thorough their childhood usually run away from their household or stop talking to their parents at some point. Therefore, people who feel like they are emotionally and financially incapable would choose to not have children. In overpopulated regions or poor countries, many people decided to be childless because they do not want to raise the child in overcrowded areas, with such bad infrastructure and a bad environment.
However, many countries are witnessing incredibly low rates of childbirth, in Japan, for example, this rate has dropped to almost 1.3%, urging the authorities to push out plans for raising fertility rates in the country. The older generation blames this trend on the youth, saying that they are being selfish for not getting married or having children. Nevertheless, from the viewpoint of the younger folks, they all feel like they are too busy to indulge in those activities, and as a part of the young generation, I agree with them. Rather than giving birth to a child because society said so, no-child couples can use their time for self-development and if one day they feel capable, they can then have a child of their own.
In conclusion, I think that having a child is more than adding another member to the family, it is such a demanding task that requires devoting a lot of time, money and energy. Childless couples made the decision not because they were selfish, they came to the decision through good intentions and their choice should be respected by others.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, however, if, nevertheless, so, then, therefore, while, for example, i think, in conclusion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 20.0 13.1623246493 152% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 10.4138276553 134% => OK
Relative clauses : 12.0 7.30460921844 164% => OK
Pronoun: 36.0 24.0651302605 150% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 44.0 41.998997996 105% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1857.0 1615.20841683 115% => OK
No of words: 374.0 315.596192385 119% => OK
Chars per words: 4.96524064171 5.12529762239 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.3976220399 4.20363070211 105% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.70932676929 2.80592935109 97% => OK
Unique words: 213.0 176.041082164 121% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.569518716578 0.561755894193 101% => OK
syllable_count: 561.6 506.74238477 111% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 5.43587174349 147% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 26.0 20.2975951904 128% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 34.3422896316 49.4020404114 70% => OK
Chars per sentence: 132.642857143 106.682146367 124% => OK
Words per sentence: 26.7142857143 20.7667163134 129% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.35714285714 7.06120827912 118% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 3.9879759519 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.297798657627 0.244688304435 122% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.101730584803 0.084324248473 121% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0582960218748 0.0667982634062 87% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.19790955912 0.151304729494 131% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0433395707401 0.056905535591 76% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.3 13.0946893788 117% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 53.55 50.2224549098 107% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 11.3001002004 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.84 12.4159519038 95% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.81 8.58950901804 103% => OK
difficult_words: 92.0 78.4519038076 117% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 9.78957915832 107% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.4 10.1190380762 123% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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