It is irrefutable that art had been favourite for several individuals from the past few years. However, it is considered by many that any human being can make paintings, while others believe that people with special skills of art from the birth time can create the paintings. In my opinion, anyone can make the art such paintings and drawings if they are fond of. Further, this essay will discuss both the views and will come up with a conclusion.
On the one hand, it is believed by many that anyone can have that ability to create art (painting). Although, people who are not familiar with this subject since childhood can also make paintings. For example, i was not aware about the art since my school days, even though now i manage to draw or paint an descent picture on any of the topic. Moreover, the only thing which person requires to create art is the passion. Further, there are several humans who do not try to paint or draw only because they are unfamiliar or having lack of knowledge about it.
On the other hand, many argue that the people born with creativity minded can create art. In fact, such individuals face no complications, whether the paintings are of the high quality or the 3D effects. Furthermore, humans with such skills feels no hesitation for making their own career in art itself. For instance, one of my colleague is a professional painter has opened his own art gallery as he was an expert in drawing since childhood.
To conclude, it is clear that people do not need any skills from the date of birth but one should have that passion in order to make adorable paintings. Besides, born artists also can make their career in sketching and drawings using their potential and ability.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, but, furthermore, however, if, moreover, so, while, for example, for instance, in fact, in my opinion, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 13.1623246493 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 7.85571142285 140% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 11.0 7.30460921844 151% => OK
Pronoun: 28.0 24.0651302605 116% => OK
Preposition: 39.0 41.998997996 93% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 8.3376753507 24% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1419.0 1615.20841683 88% => OK
No of words: 303.0 315.596192385 96% => OK
Chars per words: 4.68316831683 5.12529762239 91% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.17215713816 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.44376012182 2.80592935109 87% => OK
Unique words: 164.0 176.041082164 93% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.541254125413 0.561755894193 96% => OK
syllable_count: 437.4 506.74238477 86% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.60771543086 87% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 29.2334663623 49.4020404114 59% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 94.6 106.682146367 89% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.2 20.7667163134 97% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.0 7.06120827912 127% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 5.01903807615 100% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.4128256513 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.386719014028 0.244688304435 158% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.133160757633 0.084324248473 158% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0943818902077 0.0667982634062 141% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.239135318489 0.151304729494 158% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.100808281695 0.056905535591 177% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.7 13.0946893788 82% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 68.1 50.2224549098 136% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.7 11.3001002004 77% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.86 12.4159519038 79% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.7 8.58950901804 90% => OK
difficult_words: 59.0 78.4519038076 75% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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