Some people think that it is always an advantage to buy local products rather
than those made in other countries. Agree or disagree?
It is often argued by the people whether the usage of the local products is beneficial than those produced in the foreign countries or not. In my belief, it may vary from person to person and ones choice, whether to use local or foreign products.
Often people enjoy using local products maybe because they are related to ones culture and also, maybe they are not very costly. However, some people prefer to use local products which are only manufactured in a particular region. Hence, such local products are consumed in a particular area and thus, are easily available. For instance, some regional clothes are easily available in the same region but may not be readily available anywhere else and can be costlier. In such cases, some people may prefer to use easily available and cheap local products.
On the other hand, some people may find the quality of foreign products more superior as compared to those of the local products maybe because, of the cost difference and quality. Although the price is more, people may love to purchase those artifacts which are unique and not easily available. For example, merchandise of certain foreign music bands is not available in local markets but, some fans may purchase them online from globalized websites. Moreover, it may also vary from person whether to purchase in quantities or spend their money on quality of products.
Thus, even though local products can be cheaper and easily available, some people may find that they lack in quality. In my opinion, although foreign products can be costly as compared to local products, it may vary from person to person whether, to use local products or products from overseas.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Did you mean 'one's'?
Suggestion: one's
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Message: Did you mean 'one's'?
Suggestion: one's
...ducts maybe because they are related to ones culture and also, maybe they are not ve...
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...d their money on quality of products. Thus, even though local products can be ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, hence, however, if, may, moreover, so, thus, for example, for instance, in my opinion, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 13.1623246493 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 12.0 7.85571142285 153% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 10.4138276553 134% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 7.30460921844 41% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 15.0 24.0651302605 62% => OK
Preposition: 35.0 41.998997996 83% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 8.3376753507 24% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1399.0 1615.20841683 87% => OK
No of words: 281.0 315.596192385 89% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.97864768683 5.12529762239 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.09427095027 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.4149939215 2.80592935109 86% => OK
Unique words: 126.0 176.041082164 72% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.448398576512 0.561755894193 80% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 458.1 506.74238477 90% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 28.6876671851 49.4020404114 58% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 107.615384615 106.682146367 101% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.6153846154 20.7667163134 104% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.84615384615 7.06120827912 125% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.22494411877 0.244688304435 92% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.105126083324 0.084324248473 125% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0709433768488 0.0667982634062 106% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.159893473527 0.151304729494 106% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.00517175468952 0.056905535591 9% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.8 13.0946893788 98% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 50.16 50.2224549098 100% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 11.3001002004 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.6 12.4159519038 93% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.05 8.58950901804 94% => OK
difficult_words: 60.0 78.4519038076 76% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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