The maps below show the changes in the art gallery ground floor in 2015 and present day.
The two maps depict the renovation in the ground floor of art exhibition from 2015 up tp the present time.
Overall, the ground floor witnessed remarkable changes with various amenities being added, replaced, and renovated so that visitors had been well-served.
The most striking alteration is to the left of exhibition, with an replacement of exhibition room 4 which had been built to children’s area opposite to tempolary exhibition. Between 2015 and the present day, the reception desk had been errected to a position where it is closer to entrance gate, and it particular the extend of the hall on the right-hand side of the floor where once it placed gallery office and cafe, it then be replaced vending machince and gallery shop on the corner of right hand.
In the past, stairs were formed so that visitors were more accessible to the exhibition, but now changed an elevator adjacent to the former stairs. Looking into the right hand, the three exhibitions room saw remain unchanged during the period.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 65, Rule ID: EN_A_VS_AN
Message: Use 'a' instead of 'an' if the following word doesn't start with a vowel sound, e.g. 'a sentence', 'a university'
Suggestion: a
...tion is to the left of exhibition, with an replacement of exhibition room 4 which ...
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Line 3, column 314, Rule ID: A_INFINITVE[1]
Message: Probably a wrong construction: a/the + infinitive
...ser to entrance gate, and it particular the extend of the hall on the right-hand side of t...
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Line 3, column 427, Rule ID: IT_VBZ[1]
Message: Did you mean 'is'?
Suggestion: is
...placed gallery office and cafe, it then be replaced vending machince and gallery s...
^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, look, so, then, well
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 7.0 129% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 6.8 88% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 3.15609756098 158% => OK
Pronoun: 6.0 5.60731707317 107% => OK
Preposition: 26.0 33.7804878049 77% => OK
Nominalization: 11.0 3.97073170732 277% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 846.0 965.302439024 88% => OK
No of words: 169.0 196.424390244 86% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.00591715976 4.92477711251 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.60555127546 3.73543355544 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.68774566347 2.65546596893 101% => OK
Unique words: 108.0 106.607317073 101% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.639053254438 0.547539520022 117% => OK
syllable_count: 255.6 283.868780488 90% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.45097560976 103% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 1.53170731707 65% => OK
Article: 5.0 4.33902439024 115% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.07073170732 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 3.0 0.482926829268 621% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 3.0 3.36585365854 89% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 6.0 8.94146341463 67% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 28.0 22.4926829268 124% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 76.5558982415 43.030603864 178% => OK
Chars per sentence: 141.0 112.824112599 125% => OK
Words per sentence: 28.1666666667 22.9334400587 123% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.16666666667 5.23603664747 80% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 1.69756097561 177% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 3.70975609756 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.09268292683 73% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.239679039629 0.215688989381 111% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.106452797922 0.103423049105 103% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.113652932194 0.0843802449381 135% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.148610285351 0.15604864568 95% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.107451984861 0.0819641961636 131% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.3 13.2329268293 123% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 51.52 61.2550243902 84% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 6.51609756098 172% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.0 10.3012195122 126% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.07 11.4140731707 106% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.42 8.06136585366 117% => OK
difficult_words: 47.0 40.7170731707 115% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 15.5 11.4329268293 136% => OK
gunning_fog: 13.2 10.9970731707 120% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 11.0658536585 117% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.