People believe that all parents should be forced to enroll in parenthood preparation courses in order to receive necessary skills in bringing up children down the road. I am of the opinion that parents should learn about childcare but this should not be mandatory.
The main reason for parents to participate in preparation courses is absorbing scientifically proven knowledge that could assist them to raise kids properly. This knowledge is assumed to be reliable as many professional experts in certain fields verify them before showing them to future parents. For example, the course includes lessons about terms of physical health such as how to prepare balanced diet for their children or the method of taking care of kids when they are sick,...are totally necessary and helpful to the child. Moreover, not only contain trustworthy information but also loads of needed exercises in order to train mother and father-to-be with great parenting skills at the end of the line.
However, parents should not be compulsory for enrolling in the course despite the benefit from the preparation courses. The biggest argument for this belief is the disparity in children's attributes. It is apparent that characteristics of a child depending a lot on family background, which is rarely similar to each other. Thus, a course that could give parents the ability to nourish and exploit the potential of the kids is clearly impossible to be designed as well as wasting their time in joining unworthy courses.
To sum up, bringing up children is undoubtedly the most important task and parents shoulder a serious responsibility on this problem. I am maintaining my opinion as it is an essential job but should not be required.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 481, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , .
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, however, if, moreover, so, thus, well, for example, such as, as well as, to sum up
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 17.0 13.1623246493 129% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 20.0 24.0651302605 83% => OK
Preposition: 44.0 41.998997996 105% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1444.0 1615.20841683 89% => OK
No of words: 280.0 315.596192385 89% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.15714285714 5.12529762239 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.09062348924 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.87870435709 2.80592935109 103% => OK
Unique words: 164.0 176.041082164 93% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.585714285714 0.561755894193 104% => OK
syllable_count: 441.0 506.74238477 87% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 4.76152304609 21% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 23.0 20.2975951904 113% => OK
Sentence length SD: 45.2351878765 49.4020404114 92% => OK
Chars per sentence: 120.333333333 106.682146367 113% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.3333333333 20.7667163134 112% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.75 7.06120827912 110% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 8.67935871743 35% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.373007042812 0.244688304435 152% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.127752174841 0.084324248473 152% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0515956659931 0.0667982634062 77% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.219844709703 0.151304729494 145% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0297358555323 0.056905535591 52% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.5 13.0946893788 111% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 48.13 50.2224549098 96% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 11.3001002004 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.94 12.4159519038 104% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.18 8.58950901804 107% => OK
difficult_words: 78.0 78.4519038076 99% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 9.78957915832 117% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.1190380762 111% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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