People living in a large cities have to face many problems in everyday life what are those problems should the government encourage people to move to regional town.
Nowadays, we live in contemporary era as well as morden epoch. During the urbanisation, individual deal with many problems which are related to large cities. Some people believe that authorities also motivate to the people to move regional town. In this case, they believed that perhaps these problems are reduced in the future but it is could not ture way to reducing this problem.
To comments with, day by day increasing population is the main factor of increasing urbanisation as well as cultivated lands are are converted into the industrialization. Due to this. it's creat a traffic jams. Because every person for their work and job also used their vehicles. In this case the number of vehicles on the roads increased day by day. So people face the traffic jams problems in their daily life routine as well as it is a major problem in the large cities. Secondly, the authorities are failed to control the used of guns and weapons, which are very dangerous for the youth and generations. Because its contribute rapid growth of crime. Thirdly, air pollution is most the prominent issue in the large cities. Due to many factories and chimneys are open in the the cities.That is why, individuals not consuming fresh air as well as there are lack of immunity and creates many diseases like respiratory, ashtma and c o p d diseases.
But there are many solution for the circumstances, so government should take steps to prevent this problem first of all authorities prevent the traffic jam, and make a strict laws against persons who to pollute the the environment areas as well as cities, if someone caught by doing this they has to pay fine at the spot.
To recapitulate, urbanisation is the major problem of large cities issues,and there are also take some steps of this problems, if government and individuals are worked together to reduce this problem.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, if, second, secondly, so, third, thirdly, well, as to, in fact, as well as, first of all
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 17.0 13.1623246493 129% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 7.85571142285 25% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 22.0 24.0651302605 91% => OK
Preposition: 41.0 41.998997996 98% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 8.3376753507 120% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1545.0 1615.20841683 96% => OK
No of words: 317.0 315.596192385 100% => OK
Chars per words: 4.8738170347 5.12529762239 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.21953715646 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.80869080563 2.80592935109 100% => OK
Unique words: 174.0 176.041082164 99% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.548895899054 0.561755894193 98% => OK
syllable_count: 494.1 506.74238477 98% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 0.809619238477 371% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 78.4725021504 49.4020404114 159% => OK
Chars per sentence: 96.5625 106.682146367 91% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.8125 20.7667163134 95% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.625 7.06120827912 94% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 18.0 5.01903807615 359% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 3.9879759519 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.252996850436 0.244688304435 103% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0737270223437 0.084324248473 87% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.09406016945 0.0667982634062 141% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.162890829279 0.151304729494 108% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0740967103035 0.056905535591 130% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.4 13.0946893788 87% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 52.19 50.2224549098 104% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 11.3001002004 95% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.97 12.4159519038 88% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.02 8.58950901804 93% => OK
difficult_words: 69.0 78.4519038076 88% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 9.78957915832 72% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.