A lot of places in the world rely on tourism as a main source of income. Unfortunately, tourism can also be a source of problems if it is not managed correctly.
Describe the advantages and disadvantages of tourism in the modern world. Do you think that benefits of tourism outweight its drawbacks?
Tourism has been playing an indispensable part in our society for many decades. However, this can also take its toll on a nation’s well-being when they are not properly controlled. Although this activity contains both positivity and negativity, personally, I believe the benefits totally overperform the drawbacks due to the enormous advantages it brings to our world
On the one hand, tourism can be the main threat to environmental damage and cultural loss of any country in the world. Mass tourists flocking to one place, which leads to a large amount of gas emitted from transportations with numerous plastic wastes being littered, together they become immensely deteriorated to the biodiversity of that nation. Moreover, many traditional jobs and skills like fishing or farming are also vulnerable and potentially extinct when local people are forced to work in the tourism industry for higher pay
On the other hand, travelers can not only bring economic but also cultural merits to a country. Tourism has become the backbone of many economies in the world since it provides higher career opportunities to indigenous people as well as increases their average income. Furthermore, via tourists, many countries can effectively promote their national identities or natural beauties that they are endowed with to a larger scale of people. Specifically, once travelers arrive back at their home, they usually express how they feel or what they saw in their previous trip to a particular country, arousing the curiosity of their family and friends
To conclude, even though tourism can be the main cause of many issues associated with the environment and culture, its advantages still outweigh its downward trend. As it is a prominent factor for the economic development and cultural promotion of every country in the world
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, furthermore, however, if, moreover, so, still, well, as well as, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 24.0 24.0651302605 100% => OK
Preposition: 37.0 41.998997996 88% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 8.3376753507 36% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1546.0 1615.20841683 96% => OK
No of words: 291.0 315.596192385 92% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.31271477663 5.12529762239 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.13022058845 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.88890841913 2.80592935109 103% => OK
Unique words: 181.0 176.041082164 103% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.621993127148 0.561755894193 111% => OK
syllable_count: 487.8 506.74238477 96% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 16.0721442886 56% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 32.0 20.2975951904 158% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 96.7437751211 49.4020404114 196% => OK
Chars per sentence: 171.777777778 106.682146367 161% => OK
Words per sentence: 32.3333333333 20.7667163134 156% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.3333333333 7.06120827912 146% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.200148225442 0.244688304435 82% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0823036371002 0.084324248473 98% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0463973159981 0.0667982634062 69% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.130799482962 0.151304729494 86% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0381520751439 0.056905535591 67% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 19.7 13.0946893788 150% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 30.54 50.2224549098 61% => OK
smog_index: 13.0 7.44779559118 175% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 17.0 11.3001002004 150% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.11 12.4159519038 114% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.16 8.58950901804 118% => OK
difficult_words: 91.0 78.4519038076 116% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 15.0 9.78957915832 153% => OK
gunning_fog: 14.8 10.1190380762 146% => OK
text_standard: 15.0 10.7795591182 139% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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