Submitted by just_maianh on Wed, 07/21/2021 - 09:29
The question of whether children should learn from their instructors or their parents has long been contentious. Some people believe that children should learn to be good citizens from their parents, while others believe that school is the ideal place for a person's character and knowledge to develop. Although children learn a lot in school, I believe that being educated by their parents is more likely to provide them with a firm foundation.
For many years, parents were thought to be the only ones who could fully educate their children at home. This is due to the fact that youngsters will obey their parents more than they will obey their teachers. In several texts, it is also stated that parents are their children's first teachers. They should instill in their children the values of obedience, respect, and honesty, which are the fundamental characteristics of a decent person. They should also begin training their children at an early age in order to assist them in naturally penetrating. My childhood buddy, for example, is a wonderful person who is always pleasant to everyone and who goes out of her way to assist me whenever I have problems. This is based on the fact that her parents shaped her personality from an early age.
On the other hand, not every parent is capable of caring for their children and instilling positive traits in them. As time goes on, the world changes, people's lives become busier, and women are no longer the primary breadwinners; they may not have the time to stay at home and educate their children. Instead, they send their children to school with the expectation that teachers will teach them everything; not only information, but also the full and speedy development of their personalities.
To summarize, each of the ideas has advantages and disadvantages, and it is up to each individual to choose the best selection. I believe that parents should begin teaching their children about basic values at an early age
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 1, Rule ID: WHETHER[3]
Message: Wordiness: Shorten this phrase to the shortest possible suggestion.
Suggestion: Whether; The question whether
...just_maianh on Wed, 07/21/2021 - 09:29 The question of whether children should learn from their instru...
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Line 3, column 259, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[1]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'persons'' or 'person's'?
Suggestion: persons'; person's
...ve that school is the ideal place for a persons character and knowledge to develop. Alt...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, may, so, still, while, for example, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 17.0 13.1623246493 129% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 7.85571142285 127% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 12.0 7.30460921844 164% => OK
Pronoun: 44.0 24.0651302605 183% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 43.0 41.998997996 102% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1684.0 1615.20841683 104% => OK
No of words: 338.0 315.596192385 107% => OK
Chars per words: 4.98224852071 5.12529762239 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.28774723029 4.20363070211 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.67717276743 2.80592935109 95% => OK
Unique words: 183.0 176.041082164 104% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.541420118343 0.561755894193 96% => OK
syllable_count: 495.0 506.74238477 98% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 10.0 5.43587174349 184% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 4.0 0.809619238477 494% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 36.457219983 49.4020404114 74% => OK
Chars per sentence: 112.266666667 106.682146367 105% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.5333333333 20.7667163134 109% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.73333333333 7.06120827912 67% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 3.4128256513 205% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.215540245004 0.244688304435 88% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0873476343874 0.084324248473 104% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0776134807816 0.0667982634062 116% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.122947508021 0.151304729494 81% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0999982829296 0.056905535591 176% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.3 13.0946893788 102% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 57.61 50.2224549098 115% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 11.3001002004 95% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.9 12.4159519038 96% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.95 8.58950901804 93% => OK
difficult_words: 69.0 78.4519038076 88% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 13.0 9.78957915832 133% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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