Extreme sports such as sky diving and skiing are very dangerous and should be banned.
To what extent do you agree or disagree with this view?
In recent years, extreme sports like sky diving or water surfing are become more popular. However, some individuals have argued that these sports are too dangerous to experience and there should be prohibited. In my point of view, I totally disagree with this opinion. I believe that they are not as dangerous as people think and playing these sports is humans’ freedom.
First of all, so-called extreme sports are not hazardous as we usually imagine. There are many training programs for people before they start experience those ones and beginners are not allowed to go alone or participate in competitions which require too many skills. For example, anyone who wants to try skying dying must sign up for a diving lesson with the registered club and undergo appropriate trainings so that the possibilities of danger can be minimized. Those who are starters aren’t permitted to try dive solo and there are always well-rounded professionals to accompany with the learners during their lessons.
What’s more, spending time on those activities is completely human’s freedom and choice. People have rights to decide how and and what to do in their leisure time, except for illegal or harmful behaviors. Even if there are much stronger arguments, regualations to ban those extreme sports are impossible to be enforced and accepted by everyone. There won’t be no policeman go to an isolated beach or climb to mountains to prevent individuals from enjoying their life. Moreover, if those sports are not allowed, there will be no training programs and humans who want to adventure won’t be prepared methodically. Instead, they will buy facilities and find someplace far from the police stations or authorities to experienced by themselves. This is much more inappropriate and high-risk for human beings.
To sum up, extreme sports should not be banned because these ones aren’t as risky and insecure as we all think and experiencing them is completely our option and independence.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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In recent years, extreme sports like sky diving or water surfing are become more popula...
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...for people before they start experience those ones and beginners are not allowed to go alo...
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...ities of danger can be minimized. Those who are starters aren’t permitted to try dive s...
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...hoice. People have rights to decide how and and what to do in their leisure time, excep...
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...completely our option and independence.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, however, if, moreover, so, well, except for, for example, first of all, to sum up
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 22.0 13.1623246493 167% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 20.0 10.4138276553 192% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 27.0 24.0651302605 112% => OK
Preposition: 36.0 41.998997996 86% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 8.3376753507 36% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1670.0 1615.20841683 103% => OK
No of words: 321.0 315.596192385 102% => OK
Chars per words: 5.20249221184 5.12529762239 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.23278547379 4.20363070211 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.82520683401 2.80592935109 101% => OK
Unique words: 191.0 176.041082164 108% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.595015576324 0.561755894193 106% => OK
syllable_count: 526.5 506.74238477 104% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 40.6512895706 49.4020404114 82% => OK
Chars per sentence: 104.375 106.682146367 98% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.0625 20.7667163134 97% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.5 7.06120827912 78% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 8.0 5.01903807615 159% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 8.67935871743 46% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 3.9879759519 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.4128256513 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.277767688955 0.244688304435 114% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.084178463306 0.084324248473 100% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0557609067443 0.0667982634062 83% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.168084365498 0.151304729494 111% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0685019431919 0.056905535591 120% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.1 13.0946893788 100% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 51.18 50.2224549098 102% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 11.3001002004 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.88 12.4159519038 104% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.76 8.58950901804 102% => OK
difficult_words: 84.0 78.4519038076 107% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.