Some people think that in this modern world, getting old is entirely bad. However, other people believe that the life of old people is much better now than it was in the past. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.
It is thought by some that in this contemporary world, aged people have been suffering a lot while others counter this argument by claiming that as compared to the past, the recent times have brought so much of ease into the life of elders. Both points of view will be discussed in-depth in this essay and will conclude by supporting the first argument.
To begin with, it is seen ubiquitously that almost all old people have been struggling hard to cope up with the on-going changes in modern society. Subsequently, this has immensely affected their routine life in coordinating and adapting to the newer challenges they face while interacting with the young generation. Consequently, they start feeling left out and disjointed from the society. Technological advancements, for instance, smartphones, have been developing so rapidly in the 21st century that old people can seldom adjust to ever-changing technologies. Hence, I certainly feel that in these times, it is extremely difficult for aging people to deal with the surrounding culture.
Contrary to that, a certain number of people claim that this century has paved the ways to better the life of old ones. One of the welcoming features of this would be the way health issues are being treated. With the support of modern and computerized instruments, many age-related diseases such as diabetes, hypertension, and arthritis could be controlled effectively which, ultimately, ease out the pain and make a life better one. This would not have been possible to achieve in the past where the older people did not have an option but to live a painful life. However, in my perspective, this benefit is restricted to a small group of old people and is not worthy in countering the previous viewpoint.
In conclusion, although it is claimed that advanced health management for old people has bettered their life, I genuinely believe that it is not the case. Aged people are trying very hard to maintain and manage their life with rapid changes which affect them significantly
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 113, Rule ID: ON-GOING[1]
Message: Did you mean 'ongoing'?
Suggestion: ongoing
...een struggling hard to cope up with the on-going changes in modern society. Subsequently...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, consequently, first, hence, however, if, so, while, for instance, in conclusion, such as, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 17.0 13.1623246493 129% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 12.0 7.30460921844 164% => OK
Pronoun: 32.0 24.0651302605 133% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 49.0 41.998997996 117% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1701.0 1615.20841683 105% => OK
No of words: 335.0 315.596192385 106% => OK
Chars per words: 5.0776119403 5.12529762239 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.27820116611 4.20363070211 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.86586442138 2.80592935109 102% => OK
Unique words: 194.0 176.041082164 110% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.579104477612 0.561755894193 103% => OK
syllable_count: 522.9 506.74238477 103% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 5.43587174349 166% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 23.0 20.2975951904 113% => OK
Sentence length SD: 44.9455452833 49.4020404114 91% => OK
Chars per sentence: 121.5 106.682146367 114% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.9285714286 20.7667163134 115% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.71428571429 7.06120827912 109% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 8.0 3.9879759519 201% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.30814162505 0.244688304435 126% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.106899113338 0.084324248473 127% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0659126614751 0.0667982634062 99% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.191281080443 0.151304729494 126% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0296248086565 0.056905535591 52% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.5 13.0946893788 111% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 48.13 50.2224549098 96% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 11.3001002004 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.48 12.4159519038 101% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.11 8.58950901804 106% => OK
difficult_words: 92.0 78.4519038076 117% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.0 9.78957915832 143% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.1190380762 111% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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