Art is considered an essential part of all cultures throughout the world. However, these days fewer and fewer people appreciate art and turn their focus to science, technology and Business.
Why do you think that is and what could be done to encourage more people t
o, take interest in the art?
There is no doubt that traditional art has a fundamental role in our society as it is viewed as an important aspect of civilization and an element of history. Presently, the interest of the public is continuously decreasing because of several potential reasons and some measures could be taken to boost up the interest of people in arts.
On the one hand, Historical art is the pride of the country as it reflects the creativity and talent of the citizens of its citizens; however, nowadays, art is disappearing as people are not taking interest in traditional creativity. First of all, in today’s modern world people, especially, young ones spend hours in front of a TV screen instead of drawings and paintings as they watch TV programmes such as Cartoons, fantasy, animation, action, adventure and have become TV addictive. As a consequence, because of modernization and technical advancements children have lost their interest in arts as well as they are in the influence of browsing the internet all the time. For example- computer games are most wanted by the youngsters instead of arts such as Pubg. Most of the people keep themselves busy playing this for a long time. secondly, Everyone devotes their time and money to college and universities for being qualified and to a bright future by pursuing a lucrative job in the fields such as medical, business and technology. Whereas in today materialistic world it is difficult to find employment in arts as people are no more interested in this fields and if they would choose then they can not earn much money to earn bread and butter as people do not support it. Finally, handmade things are not appreciated these days because everyone is living in automation.
On the other hand, in order to encourage people towards arts, many steps could be taken that I am going to demonstrate. First of all, traditional arts can be promoted with the collective efforts of the public and government as government can create awareness among people regarding the importance of art in the country and also the artists makes the world beautiful and worth seeing which would result in motivating people to appreciate and develop art skills. Besides, arts should be highly valued everywhere by opening vistas for artists that would bring more and more young ones into this field. Additionally, telecasting art channels on television will be a positive impact on young ones as they would follow what they will see which will not only build art abilities but also makes them imaginative and creative.
To conclude, Although the tendency towards other sectors is rising instead of arts in these days yet I believe that with collective efforts arts can get famous and also people would appreciate and love arts more than other technologies.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, but, finally, first, however, if, regarding, second, secondly, so, then, well, whereas, as for, for example, no doubt, such as, as well as, first of all, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 19.0 13.1623246493 144% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 15.0 7.85571142285 191% => OK
Conjunction : 22.0 10.4138276553 211% => Less conjunction wanted
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 27.0 24.0651302605 112% => OK
Preposition: 56.0 41.998997996 133% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 8.3376753507 120% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2319.0 1615.20841683 144% => OK
No of words: 465.0 315.596192385 147% => Less content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.98709677419 5.12529762239 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.64369019777 4.20363070211 110% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.79609922692 2.80592935109 100% => OK
Unique words: 240.0 176.041082164 136% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.516129032258 0.561755894193 92% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 724.5 506.74238477 143% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 0.0 5.43587174349 0% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 31.0 20.2975951904 153% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 71.0766722162 49.4020404114 144% => OK
Chars per sentence: 154.6 106.682146367 145% => OK
Words per sentence: 31.0 20.7667163134 149% => OK
Discourse Markers: 12.4 7.06120827912 176% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 7.0 5.01903807615 139% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 8.67935871743 127% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.261555334349 0.244688304435 107% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0878945151272 0.084324248473 104% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0375696603966 0.0667982634062 56% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.160919568212 0.151304729494 106% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0356381968022 0.056905535591 63% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 17.6 13.0946893788 134% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 40.01 50.2224549098 80% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 15.4 11.3001002004 136% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.25 12.4159519038 99% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.74 8.58950901804 102% => OK
difficult_words: 105.0 78.4519038076 134% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 15.0 9.78957915832 153% => OK
gunning_fog: 14.4 10.1190380762 142% => OK
text_standard: 15.0 10.7795591182 139% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.