Movies and television have more negative effects than positive effects on the way young people behave.
This is a fact that toddlers are under the great influence of technical advancements. Many argue that different movies and other programs that are telecasted on tv impacts the behaviour of younger generation in a negative way instead of having positive effects on them. According to my perception it has both favourable and adverse impacts on the attitude of young ones.
On the one hand, there are some devastating affects on pupils of watching television for longer hours. Firstly, sitting for whole day in front of tv screen makes youngsters aggressive by nature as they become addictive to watch movies and serials everyday without taking break. Therefore, when guardians try to divert their minds towards study or other important activities such as physical exercises or outdoor activities, they behaves poorly with them and it makes them disobedient.
On the other hand, there are some channels that are sponsored specifically for education purpose or to develop skills such as painting, drawing and many more. First of all, if children would watch movies that provides social message to children or to teach moral values to direct their behaviour, it will allow them to respect others and do things that are acceptable.
To conclude, although i believe that some negatives impacts make them behave improperly, there are some positive impacts that can make them responsible.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Consider replacing "in a negative way" with adverb for "negative"; eg, "in a hasty manner" with "hastily".
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Message: 'Everyday' is an adjective. Did you mean 'every day'?
Suggestion: every day
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Message: The pronoun 'they' must be used with a non-third-person form of a verb: 'behave'
Suggestion: behave
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Message: Did you mean 'I'?
Suggestion: I
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, firstly, if, so, therefore, such as, first of all, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 13.1623246493 61% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 7.85571142285 38% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 24.0 24.0651302605 100% => OK
Preposition: 27.0 41.998997996 64% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1168.0 1615.20841683 72% => OK
No of words: 222.0 315.596192385 70% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.26126126126 5.12529762239 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.8600083453 4.20363070211 92% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.6984049914 2.80592935109 96% => OK
Unique words: 143.0 176.041082164 81% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.644144144144 0.561755894193 115% => OK
syllable_count: 365.4 506.74238477 72% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 16.0721442886 56% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 24.0 20.2975951904 118% => OK
Sentence length SD: 43.8924049225 49.4020404114 89% => OK
Chars per sentence: 129.777777778 106.682146367 122% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.6666666667 20.7667163134 119% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.33333333333 7.06120827912 118% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.01903807615 80% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.172591813573 0.244688304435 71% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0617997668441 0.084324248473 73% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0774017913132 0.0667982634062 116% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0978025758968 0.151304729494 65% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0691357407827 0.056905535591 121% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.7 13.0946893788 120% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 47.12 50.2224549098 94% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.7 11.3001002004 112% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.52 12.4159519038 109% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.38 8.58950901804 109% => OK
difficult_words: 64.0 78.4519038076 82% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.1190380762 115% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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