Some people think that individuals today are more dependent on each other. Others believe people have become more independent.
In our modern society, as time elapses, a number of people argue that individuals are becoming more reliant on others meanwhile, another agglomerations advocate the notion that human being is much more independent than they used to. Personally speaking, my own perspective coincides with the latter opinion.
People who believe that humankind are more dependent vindicate their points based on tremendously worldwide cultural shift. Currently, a large proportion of population no longer consider independence to be the precedence in their life. On the contrary, substituting for solitary contend with hardships or maintaining the equanimity regardless of mental breakdown, people are frequently requiring helps, allowing the rest of the world to see their vulnerability. In the past, masculines would exclude socially emotional express. Now, men is under no obligation to cry, ask for help and to not be invincible. Moreover, the percentage of mental-ill people are exceedingly upsurging increasingly corroborate a dependent society and the importance of compassionate network for a long-term mental health.
Nevertheless, the world is undoubtfully witnessing the era of unprecedented independence due to advanced technology. Obviously enough, state-of-the-art technology is in charge of numerous tasks that once carried out by human being. Whereby, humankind can effortlessly lead a self-reliant lifestyle. Users can sign up for educational courses online, order food by delivery, and access mass amounts of information at their disposals. In addition, we possess a greater autonomy when drawn a parallel with the past. We can freely take up our careers, take a vacation and especially choose our partner, which had been decided solely by parents since time immemorial. Furthermore, feminism and gender equality have given female the golden opportunities to live an autonomous life.
In conclusion, despite people’s accretionary dependency, more are potentially leading an independent life thanks to the advance of technology and dramatic shift in social notion. This change has its positives and negatives but its reality is undeniable.
- Some people think that individuals today are more dependent on each other Others believe people have become more independent 89
- Some countries are struggling with increases in crime rates Some believe that having more police on the streets is best way to reduce and combat crime To what extent do you agree or disagree 84
- Directors of large organizations earn much higher salaries than ordinary employees Some people think it is necessary but others are of opinion that is unfair Discuss both view and give your own opinion 84
- Because many children are not able to learn foreign languages schools should not force them to learn foreign languages To what extent do you agree or disagree 89
- Movies and computer games containing violence are popular Some people say they have a negative effect on society and should be censored Others say they are just harmless relaxation Discuss both these views and give your own opinion 92
Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, furthermore, if, moreover, nevertheless, so, while, in addition, in conclusion, on the contrary
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 13.1623246493 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 18.0 24.0651302605 75% => OK
Preposition: 44.0 41.998997996 105% => OK
Nominalization: 11.0 8.3376753507 132% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1834.0 1615.20841683 114% => OK
No of words: 316.0 315.596192385 100% => OK
Chars per words: 5.80379746835 5.12529762239 113% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.21620550194 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.29876793555 2.80592935109 118% => OK
Unique words: 218.0 176.041082164 124% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.689873417722 0.561755894193 123% => OK
syllable_count: 586.8 506.74238477 116% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.9 1.60771543086 118% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 16.0721442886 106% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 52.3748136729 49.4020404114 106% => OK
Chars per sentence: 107.882352941 106.682146367 101% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.5882352941 20.7667163134 90% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.88235294118 7.06120827912 83% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.224052924232 0.244688304435 92% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0517011416266 0.084324248473 61% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.083903029734 0.0667982634062 126% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.133629397264 0.151304729494 88% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0820238750965 0.056905535591 144% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.2 13.0946893788 116% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 27.83 50.2224549098 55% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.9 11.3001002004 123% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 16.36 12.4159519038 132% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.93 8.58950901804 127% => OK
difficult_words: 128.0 78.4519038076 163% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 9.78957915832 123% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.