More and more people work at home and study at home with the development of computer technology.do you think it is a positive or negative development?
It is ireffutable that due to several inovations in the field of computer, people are more attracted towrds it .Therefore, they prefore to work and study online o computer. I believe that , this technological development have positive effects on soceity, which will mentioned in upcoming paragraphs.
Attending online classes and working through computer while sitting in home assits to individual for spending quality of time with their family members.In other words, attending online mettings and submit their work online saves commuting time.so, this time can be utilize with members of family and make strong family bondings. Furthermore, it was extremly helpful for educatiomal organizations and companies during covid 19 bacause at that time government announced full lockdown. So, this is the only way for teaching and working purposes. For example , zoom application is a boon for my people because on this app several people can do meetings and attend classes on same time, so it provide same attmoshphier as school and offices.
Moving further, individual can able to collaborate with international organizations. One can do work in U.S company while sitting in India. So, it make more employment opportunities and enhance the level of study. Due to several online platforms for study, the quality level of education also inclined. Students can gather more data about particular subject . So, people don't need to go outside for hiring tuition teacher instead of it they can find specialist online tutuor. For example , go doodle is a appliction through this student can acquire any kind of knowledge from their favourite tutor.
In conclusion, technological development assits citizens of any country in many ways and provide them quality education and more working oppertunities . Despite of these advantages, it saves people from corona virus by allowing them to working online.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, furthermore, so, therefore, while, for example, in conclusion, kind of, in other words
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 13.1623246493 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 25.0 24.0651302605 104% => OK
Preposition: 40.0 41.998997996 95% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 8.3376753507 120% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1601.0 1615.20841683 99% => OK
No of words: 294.0 315.596192385 93% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.44557823129 5.12529762239 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.14082457966 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.91027941776 2.80592935109 104% => OK
Unique words: 178.0 176.041082164 101% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.605442176871 0.561755894193 108% => OK
syllable_count: 515.7 506.74238477 102% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.8 1.60771543086 112% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 5.43587174349 166% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 68.5533044831 49.4020404114 139% => OK
Chars per sentence: 106.733333333 106.682146367 100% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.6 20.7667163134 94% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.13333333333 7.06120827912 87% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 20.0 5.01903807615 398% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 9.0 3.4128256513 264% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.215147186593 0.244688304435 88% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0660112210036 0.084324248473 78% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0460357954372 0.0667982634062 69% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.135349799745 0.151304729494 89% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0431834322454 0.056905535591 76% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.0 13.0946893788 107% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 35.27 50.2224549098 70% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.1 11.3001002004 116% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.33 12.4159519038 115% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.31 8.58950901804 108% => OK
difficult_words: 88.0 78.4519038076 112% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.0 9.78957915832 143% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.7795591182 130% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.