Climate change is now an accepted threat to our planet, but there is not enough political action to control excessive consumerism and pollution.
Do you agree?
As the old adage goes "men are distributed not by things but they are distributed by the view which they take of them. ``The contentious issue at present is climate change which is dangerous to the planet. The people espouse the notion that to protect the environment the government is bringing changes to the planet. I opine that there are not enough actions taken by political people for the pollution on the Earth. This essay will scrutinize the aspect of quandary.
To begin with, the government is aggrandizing the prices of fossil fuels because if the prices go high the proponents will augment the use of vehicles. Furthermore, the government is also planting more and more trees in the city as well as on roads in order to reduce the diseases which are happening by air pollution. For example, the survey 0f 2020 elucidates that 30% of people have changed their gasoline vehicles to electric vehicles for reducing carbon emission.
Secondly, I vehemently believe, the pollution laws which are implemented by the government do not have any strict rules which people have to compulsory follow the rules, so the proponents usually don't follow rules. Similarly, the people do not know how to save the environment for The government has to arrange a public awareness program so that they follow the rules in their quotidian life. To exemplify, the survey of 2021 illustrates that 50% of people do have knowledge about global warming and to conserve the environment.
In conclusion, from an overall perspective without a shadow of doubt, I am inclined to believe that if political action is superior, then the world will be saved from climate change for the future generation.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, furthermore, if, second, secondly, similarly, so, then, well, for example, in conclusion, as well as, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 7.85571142285 38% => OK
Conjunction : 3.0 10.4138276553 29% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 11.0 7.30460921844 151% => OK
Pronoun: 16.0 24.0651302605 66% => OK
Preposition: 37.0 41.998997996 88% => OK
Nominalization: 13.0 8.3376753507 156% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1419.0 1615.20841683 88% => OK
No of words: 282.0 315.596192385 89% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.03191489362 5.12529762239 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.09790868904 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.81396999655 2.80592935109 100% => OK
Unique words: 157.0 176.041082164 89% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.556737588652 0.561755894193 99% => OK
syllable_count: 448.2 506.74238477 88% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 8.0 2.52805611222 316% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 23.0 20.2975951904 113% => OK
Sentence length SD: 45.9942629273 49.4020404114 93% => OK
Chars per sentence: 118.25 106.682146367 111% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.5 20.7667163134 113% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.5 7.06120827912 149% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.01903807615 80% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 3.4128256513 176% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.140690584834 0.244688304435 57% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0535059695242 0.084324248473 63% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.059110173691 0.0667982634062 88% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0873555575315 0.151304729494 58% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0557637174076 0.056905535591 98% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.0 13.0946893788 107% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 48.13 50.2224549098 96% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 11.3001002004 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.19 12.4159519038 98% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.64 8.58950901804 101% => OK
difficult_words: 69.0 78.4519038076 88% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.1190380762 111% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.