You should spend about 20 minutes on this task.
The chart below shows global sales of the top five mobile phone brands between 2009 and
2013.
Write a report for a university, lecturer describing the information shown below.
Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make
comparisons where relevant.
You should write at least 150 words.
The bar chart provides information about the number of worldwide sales for the top five best-selling handphone brands – Samsung, Apple, Nokia, LG and ZTE, from 2009 to 2013. Overall, the sales number for Samsung, Apple and ZTE had increased throughout the period, while the sales figure for Nokia and LG had decreased.
In 2009, Samsung sold 250 million phones, while Nokia sold close to 450 million phones, the highest for the year. In contrast, by 2013, Nokia’s phone sales dipped markedly to reach slightly above 250 million units and Samsung’s sales figures doubled to reach its highest point at 450 million phone units.
It can be observed that the mobile phone sales for Apple and LG had reverse trends, although both phones sold less than 150 million units in each of these three years. Apple’s sales rose slightly, while LG’s sales went down gradually. Finally, Zte remained the least popular phones despite observing a slight rise in sales number from2009 to 2013.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 56, Rule ID: THE_SUPERLATIVE[2]
Message: A determiner is probably missing here: 'were the highest'.
Suggestion: were the highest
...mobile phones sold by Samsung and Nokia were highest over the projected periods. The worlds ...
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Line 3, column 96, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
...ere highest over the projected periods. The worlds demand for Samsung branded mobil...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
if, so, well, while
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 7.0 71% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 6.8 88% => OK
Relative clauses : 1.0 3.15609756098 32% => OK
Pronoun: 3.0 5.60731707317 54% => OK
Preposition: 40.0 33.7804878049 118% => OK
Nominalization: 0.0 3.97073170732 0% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 947.0 965.302439024 98% => OK
No of words: 206.0 196.424390244 105% => OK
Chars per words: 4.59708737864 4.92477711251 93% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.78849575616 3.73543355544 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.16161183982 2.65546596893 81% => OK
Unique words: 91.0 106.607317073 85% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.441747572816 0.547539520022 81% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 279.9 283.868780488 99% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.45097560976 96% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 1.53170731707 65% => OK
Article: 7.0 4.33902439024 161% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.07073170732 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 3.36585365854 149% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 8.94146341463 101% => OK
Sentence length: 22.0 22.4926829268 98% => OK
Sentence length SD: 39.9196724299 43.030603864 93% => OK
Chars per sentence: 105.222222222 112.824112599 93% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.8888888889 22.9334400587 100% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.11111111111 5.23603664747 40% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 1.69756097561 118% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 3.70975609756 135% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 1.13902439024 263% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 4.09268292683 24% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.152773065535 0.215688989381 71% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0829041048258 0.103423049105 80% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.03810911134 0.0843802449381 45% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.109188462455 0.15604864568 70% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0131190198412 0.0819641961636 16% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.7 13.2329268293 88% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 66.07 61.2550243902 108% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 10.3012195122 92% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.7 11.4140731707 85% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.1 8.06136585366 88% => OK
difficult_words: 31.0 40.7170731707 76% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 11.4329268293 79% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.9970731707 98% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 11.0658536585 90% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.