You work at home and have a problem with a piece of equipment that you use for your job.
Write a letter to the shop or company which supplied the equipment.
In your letter
- describe the problem with the equipment
- explain how this problem is affecting your work
- say what you want the shop or company to do
Dear Sir or Madam,
I am working as a Senior Architect in FYI and my company had ordered a dozen of Dell keyboards from your company for our employees who are working out from home. I have been facing issues with it since past two days. The keyboard buttons- Ctrl, Shift and Enter do not seem to work appropriately. There is a glitch when I am trying to use those keys as they get stuck for a while and I have to hard press the buttons to get them working.
I am not able to complete my deadlines on time due to which I have to work round the clock most of the times. I am trying to use it to my advantage but it is not working out me as those keys play an important part while I am using design software.
I would appreciate if the company do something about it at the earliest so as to not hamper my work. If you could replace the existing keyboard with better functioning one that would be highly appreciated.
Looking forward to hearing from you.
Yours faithfully,
Shalaka
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 6, column 1, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
...t while I am using design software. I would appreciate if the company do some...
^
Line 6, column 73, Rule ID: SO_AS_TO[1]
Message: Use simply 'to'
Suggestion: to
...y do something about it at the earliest so as to not hamper my work. If you could replac...
^^^^^^^^
Line 6, column 102, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “If” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...e earliest so as to not hamper my work. If you could replace the existing keyboard...
^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, if, look, so, while, as to
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 7.48453608247 67% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 4.92783505155 61% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 5.05154639175 99% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 3.03092783505 132% => OK
Pronoun: 28.0 32.9175257732 85% => OK
Preposition: 27.0 26.3917525773 102% => OK
Nominalization: 0.0 3.85567010309 0% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 803.0 937.175257732 86% => OK
No of words: 188.0 206.0 91% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.27127659574 4.54256449028 94% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.70287850203 3.78020617076 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.43992440458 2.54303337028 96% => OK
Unique words: 119.0 127.690721649 93% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.632978723404 0.622605031667 102% => OK
syllable_count: 245.7 290.88556701 84% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.41237113402 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 9.13402061856 66% => OK
Article: 1.0 0.824742268041 121% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 0.0 1.44329896907 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 12.6804123711 79% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 18.0 16.3608247423 110% => OK
Sentence length SD: 46.5580283088 44.8134815571 104% => OK
Chars per sentence: 80.3 76.5299724578 105% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.8 16.8248392259 112% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.1 4.34317383033 71% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 2.54639175258 118% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 7.41237113402 67% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.49484536082 67% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.94845360825 101% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.177262441355 0.216113520407 82% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0701745214363 0.0766984524023 91% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.032205772507 0.0603063233224 53% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0914261229788 0.12726935374 72% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0310129316287 0.0580467560999 53% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.1 8.37731958763 97% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 78.59 70.7449484536 111% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 6.8 7.45979381443 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 7.49 8.71597938144 86% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.22 7.59969072165 95% => OK
difficult_words: 32.0 41.2886597938 78% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 8.62886597938 104% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 8.54432989691 108% => OK
text_standard: 7.0 8.15463917526 86% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.