Nowadays, many animal species are becoming extinct. Some people believe that
countries and individuals must solve this problem, others believe that human beings are
more important. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.
It is true that there are conflicting views about protecting wild animals or people live. Many people think that national and local authority or people take responsibility for save the endangered species now, while others claim that solving the stand of living of people is priority. In this essay, I would like to take these views under consideration and provide my opinion.
On the one hand, there are certain reason why protecting animals from extinction. The first reason is that, nowadays, animals are becoming increasingly extinction. In particular, the red list have announced some animals such as whale, tiger which are able to extinct. There are balance between animals and human on the planet. If the diversity of animals are reduce, people will have to face with food shortage. For example, the fish stock are becoming exhausted. It is not enough meet the need of people's food. In addition, saving the animals is improve their habitat. People create a environment for their living. By doing this, people not only save the endangered species but also contribute to environment, reducing the climate change.
On the other hand, there are also some reasons why people's welfare should high of a agenda. First of all, the number of people death have increased, it is watch on a TV screen on a daily basic by cause health, poverty, war...Therefore, government should concentrate on the enhance the people live more than anything. In particular, government should support them a small budget to improve their standard of living.
In conclusion, although there are certain reasons why should preserve the endangered animals. In my opinion, I still put more weight on improving people survival.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Suggestion:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, if, so, still, therefore, while, for example, in addition, in conclusion, in particular, such as, first of all, in my opinion, it is true, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 13.1623246493 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 10.4138276553 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 18.0 24.0651302605 75% => OK
Preposition: 34.0 41.998997996 81% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 8.3376753507 120% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1429.0 1615.20841683 88% => OK
No of words: 277.0 315.596192385 88% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.15884476534 5.12529762239 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.07962216107 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.72062801275 2.80592935109 97% => OK
Unique words: 159.0 176.041082164 90% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.574007220217 0.561755894193 102% => OK
syllable_count: 450.0 506.74238477 89% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 9.0 4.76152304609 189% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 16.0721442886 112% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 20.2975951904 74% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 45.8721048133 49.4020404114 93% => OK
Chars per sentence: 79.3888888889 106.682146367 74% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.3888888889 20.7667163134 74% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.66666666667 7.06120827912 137% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 8.0 5.01903807615 159% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.215687737105 0.244688304435 88% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.065473054976 0.084324248473 78% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0367251651492 0.0667982634062 55% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.124186411871 0.151304729494 82% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0518274039274 0.056905535591 91% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.6 13.0946893788 81% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 56.25 50.2224549098 112% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 11.3001002004 81% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.35 12.4159519038 99% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.97 8.58950901804 93% => OK
difficult_words: 63.0 78.4519038076 80% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 10.1190380762 79% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.7795591182 74% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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