For school children, their teachers have more influence on their intelligence
and social development than their parents. To what extent do you agree or disagree?
It is true that investing in education is the smart decision in the future. Many people think that teachers play a key role in student's intelligence and public more than parents. In my opinion, I discourage with this idea because of the following reason
On the one hand, parents always desire to bring the best thing for their offspring. I believe that parents who are elderly people having more experience in social, they have worked a few years. Therefore, they could teach children how to deal with problems. For example, parents could give them some useful advices when they have an interview. Moreover, teaching them about behavior when eating out. However, some others still argue that teachers have been trained in major areas. Hence. they know how to adopt the best methods in teaching. In particular, they organize some competitions to encourage student's creativity and intellectual. I still believe that parents take responsibility for teaching children about social effectively.
On the other hand, parents have knowledge enough to help children's intelligence development. I have a firm believe that parents spend more time with their offspring more than in school. Particularly, parents can easy create a small playground to children at home to boost their mental. Thanks to this, the offspring are much more smart in learning. Nevertheless, others claims that during the long-study process in school, teachers will probably discovery student's weakness and strength. From this, they will find the best appropriate way to improve their intelligence
In conclusion, for the reason I have mentioned before. I strongly believe that parents is a part essential in develop of children's mental and social rather than teacher.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
hence, however, moreover, nevertheless, so, still, therefore, for example, in conclusion, in particular, in my opinion, it is true, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 13.1623246493 46% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 10.4138276553 38% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 11.0 7.30460921844 151% => OK
Pronoun: 31.0 24.0651302605 129% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 36.0 41.998997996 86% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1466.0 1615.20841683 91% => OK
No of words: 275.0 315.596192385 87% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.33090909091 5.12529762239 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.07223819929 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.76622844948 2.80592935109 99% => OK
Unique words: 158.0 176.041082164 90% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.574545454545 0.561755894193 102% => OK
syllable_count: 437.4 506.74238477 86% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 11.0 5.43587174349 202% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 16.0721442886 112% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 20.2975951904 74% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 28.8540388084 49.4020404114 58% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 81.4444444444 106.682146367 76% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.2777777778 20.7667163134 74% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.27777777778 7.06120827912 117% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 13.0 8.67935871743 150% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.351288005383 0.244688304435 144% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0995736954451 0.084324248473 118% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.08276642335 0.0667982634062 124% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.204794443087 0.151304729494 135% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0883433762855 0.056905535591 155% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.3 13.0946893788 86% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 56.25 50.2224549098 112% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 11.3001002004 81% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.04 12.4159519038 105% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.06 8.58950901804 94% => OK
difficult_words: 64.0 78.4519038076 82% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 9.78957915832 77% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 10.1190380762 79% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.7795591182 74% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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