Some people believe that teaching children at home is best for a child's development while others think that it is important for children to go to school.
Discuss the advantages of both methods and give your own opinion.
It is true that there are conflicting views about how to develop for youngster's mental and physical. lt is believed that home-schooling plays an important role in education, while others claim that it is better when children study in educational institutions. In this essay, I would like to take these views under consideration and provide my personal opinion.
On the one hand, there are certain benefits of home-schooling. The first is that parents spend more time than school for their offsprings. In particular, parents are always best friend with children. They know how the best way to teaching a child. Parents can play and learn with children together. Sometimes parents can teach a child how to solve the problems when going outside. Thanks to passing a experience for children, they can deal with the problems in society. In addition, youngsters have a sense of unwinded when they learn at home. They no longer feel stress or uncomfortable at school. Children can do whatever they so wishes. This helps a child develop their ability and creativity.
On the other hand, there are also proses when children study at school. First of all, teachers plays a crucial role in education and development of children. Teacher is a person having knowledges and experiences in education. They are trained to teaching. For example, teacher can identify a child's weakness and strength in classroom. From this example, they can make the best methods to improve children. Furthermore, youngsters are able to contact with other child in classroom. By making friend with new friends, children will become confident and mature.
In conclusion, although there are certain benefits of home-schooling. In my opinion, I still put more weight on studying at school. I believe that teachers are a part in development of children.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, furthermore, if, so, still, while, for example, in addition, in conclusion, in particular, first of all, in my opinion, it is true, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 25.0 24.0651302605 104% => OK
Preposition: 46.0 41.998997996 110% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1528.0 1615.20841683 95% => OK
No of words: 296.0 315.596192385 94% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.16216216216 5.12529762239 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.14784890444 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.9013170481 2.80592935109 103% => OK
Unique words: 160.0 176.041082164 91% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.540540540541 0.561755894193 96% => OK
syllable_count: 446.4 506.74238477 88% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 10.0 5.43587174349 184% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 9.0 4.76152304609 189% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 25.0 16.0721442886 156% => OK
Sentence length: 11.0 20.2975951904 54% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 24.1696007414 49.4020404114 49% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 61.12 106.682146367 57% => More chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 11.84 20.7667163134 57% => More words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 6.48 7.06120827912 92% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 16.0 8.67935871743 184% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 3.4128256513 205% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.336515124783 0.244688304435 138% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0901843595825 0.084324248473 107% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0524442793382 0.0667982634062 79% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.21121454151 0.151304729494 140% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0123756151375 0.056905535591 22% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.8 13.0946893788 67% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 68.77 50.2224549098 137% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 6.4 11.3001002004 57% => Flesch kincaid grade is low.
coleman_liau_index: 11.76 12.4159519038 95% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.65 8.58950901804 89% => OK
difficult_words: 65.0 78.4519038076 83% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 9.78957915832 72% => OK
gunning_fog: 6.4 10.1190380762 63% => OK
text_standard: 7.0 10.7795591182 65% => The average readability is low. Need to imporve the language.
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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