A close friend is coming to visit your hometown. He/she asked you for advice for things to do in your hometown and the surrounding area.
Write a letter to your friend. In your letter….
• Ask for more details about your friend's plan
• Suggest some places to visit and things to do in your hometown
• Tell your friend about food or drinks he/she should try during his/her stay
Dear Nachiket,
Hope this letter finds you in a good health.I am doing good too.As per our last week's conversation,you said you are visiting Mumbai, this week.I am really glad and excited as much as you but also feeling bad because I won't be there.This week itself,I will have to go for the training to Calcutta.
But,I can help you in many other ways.For that,need few details like when will you reach,how many of your other friends are accompanying,where will you stay etc.Though,you are most welcome to stay at my place.My parents will be happy to treat you.
When in Mumbai,you please visit Bandra band stand, which is at walking distance from my flat.You may find a glimpse of any celebrity as they stay nearby.Also, there is a shopping lane 1 km ahead where you can buy variety of things.Also,there is a chinese restaurant name "China Town" around 3 km from the shopping lane.As you are fond of chinese food,you will love this place.
Do let me know any other need you have.Will miss this opportunity to meet you.But,I am sure you will enjoy with your friends.
Let me know your plan.
Best Regards,
Sharvil
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... Let me know your plan. Best Regards, Sharvil
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, may, really, so
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 7.48453608247 120% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 12.0 4.92783505155 244% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 2.0 5.05154639175 40% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 6.0 3.03092783505 198% => OK
Pronoun: 40.0 32.9175257732 122% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 19.0 26.3917525773 72% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 3.85567010309 52% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 937.0 937.175257732 100% => OK
No of words: 195.0 206.0 95% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.80512820513 4.54256449028 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.73687570622 3.78020617076 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.8699444588 2.54303337028 113% => OK
Unique words: 135.0 127.690721649 106% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.692307692308 0.622605031667 111% => OK
syllable_count: 273.6 290.88556701 94% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 13.0 9.13402061856 142% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 1.83505154639 163% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 6.0 12.6804123711 47% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 32.0 16.3608247423 196% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 139.663882232 44.8134815571 312% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 156.166666667 76.5299724578 204% => Less chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 32.5 16.8248392259 193% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.33333333333 4.34317383033 100% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 27.0 2.54639175258 1060% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 7.41237113402 67% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.49484536082 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.94845360825 25% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.185708104799 0.216113520407 86% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.101913385563 0.0766984524023 133% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0631768142163 0.0603063233224 105% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.122613042538 0.12726935374 96% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0477454338038 0.0580467560999 82% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 17.5 8.37731958763 209% => Automated_readability_index is high.
flesch_reading_ease: 55.92 70.7449484536 79% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 3.82989690722 230% => Smog_index is high.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.4 7.45979381443 180% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.21 8.71597938144 129% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.46 7.59969072165 111% => OK
difficult_words: 40.0 41.2886597938 97% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 26.5 8.62886597938 307% => Linsear_write_formula is high.
gunning_fog: 14.8 8.54432989691 173% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 8.15463917526 110% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.