You are moving to a new country, write a letter to the accommodation agency to rent a house.
In your letter, describe:
• yourself and your family
• which area you would like to live in
• and what facilities you need in the house
Dear Sir,
I am Mohit Khanna and I am writing this letter to inform you that me and my family are moving to Mumbai next month.I have already communicated with a local agent and he advised me to contact you directly.
My company has decided to give me a transfer as a Corporate Manager.So we are looking for a house in the Western Mumbai where my office headquarter is located.It is near the metro station. So it will be great if you can help me to find the accommodation in the same vicinity.
We have 2 kids out of which,one is infant and another is 4 years old.So,request you to find the house from this perspective. Here,in Nagpur, where we are residing now,has full-time security and intercom facility. Expecting the flat with same amenities.Also,the water and gas supply is uninterrupted.I need a house with 3 rooms with parking within premises and children's play area.The rent I can pay is up to 30,000 per month.
I am sure you will be able to find the same as per above requirements near station.
Looking forward for a positive response from you soon.
Yours faithfully,
Mohit Khanna
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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...ve me a transfer as a Corporate Manager.So we are looking for a house in the Weste...
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... where my office headquarter is located.It is near the metro station. So it will b...
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...ponse from you soon. Yours faithfully, Mohit Khanna
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, if, look, so
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 7.48453608247 147% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 4.92783505155 101% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 5.05154639175 139% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 3.03092783505 132% => OK
Pronoun: 29.0 32.9175257732 88% => OK
Preposition: 23.0 26.3917525773 87% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 3.85567010309 78% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 907.0 937.175257732 97% => OK
No of words: 194.0 206.0 94% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.67525773196 4.54256449028 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.73207559907 3.78020617076 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.93612247309 2.54303337028 115% => OK
Unique words: 120.0 127.690721649 94% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.618556701031 0.622605031667 99% => OK
syllable_count: 291.6 290.88556701 100% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.41237113402 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 9.13402061856 88% => OK
Article: 2.0 0.824742268041 243% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 0.0 1.83505154639 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 12.6804123711 71% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 21.0 16.3608247423 128% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 65.0073120294 44.8134815571 145% => OK
Chars per sentence: 100.777777778 76.5299724578 132% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.5555555556 16.8248392259 128% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.0 4.34317383033 46% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 15.0 2.54639175258 589% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 7.41237113402 94% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.49484536082 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.94845360825 51% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.229347073319 0.216113520407 106% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0857568450378 0.0766984524023 112% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0486955847868 0.0603063233224 81% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.110889193606 0.12726935374 87% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0389674946718 0.0580467560999 67% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.4 8.37731958763 136% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 58.62 70.7449484536 83% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 3.82989690722 230% => Smog_index is high.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 7.45979381443 138% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.86 8.71597938144 113% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.67 7.59969072165 114% => OK
difficult_words: 49.0 41.2886597938 119% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.0 8.62886597938 162% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 8.54432989691 122% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 8.15463917526 123% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.