Pollution of rivers, lakes and seas is a major concern for people who seek to protect the environment.
What are the possible causes of water pollution, and what effects does this have on animal life and human society?
Pollution of rivers, lakes and seas is a major concern for human beings and animals too who seek to protect the environment. Now a days, many of the rivers, lakes and seas are majorly polluted by humans. There are many possible causes of water pollution, and it effects to animal life and human society. This essay will discuss about the problems of the water pollution.
Meanwhile, the lots of water is polluted by industries mainly. Often, the wastage comes from the industries and manufacturing companies are directly flow into the rivers, lakes and seas. when the companies or factories dumb their wastage into the sea the water has been polluted. And Industries wastage like chemicals, minerals, oils. chemical waste, solid waste and sewage water also mix with the sea water. Eventually, from the restaurants or hotels waste like vegetables and refined oil are dumb in the seas or oceans or lakes. Additionally, some factories flow waste oil into seas its damages or kills the most of the fishes. Due to this aquatic animals are going to die.
Other than private sector the government also spoiling the water. Overwhelming, sewage water causes more damage to the water pollution. For example, IN my town we have beautiful lake located near to my house, From the past three years, lots of odor getting from the lake. when we went investigation we got that the sewage water was flown into the lake frequently and also in winter the seasonal birds flew throw these lake but now there are no seasonal birds are coming. That too, in lots of beach's the people were throwing plastic into the seas with that plastic couldn't decomposes for the years with the help of plastic fungus, bacteria, algae were formed. Further more not only animal life and also human life also in danger with the water pollution .Once upon a time we get a lot fresh water from the lakes without filters we were drink but now a days its not possible. Government and each and every citizen must take care of the water in seas/lakes/oceans/rivers...
Pollution of rivers, lakes and seas is a major concern for people who seek to protect the environment .My Conclusion is Government should keep the strict rules and regulation about the water pollution. Furthermore, government should keep the fines who makes the water polluted and also don't mix the sewage water in seas. This essay has discussed about problems of the water pollution.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, furthermore, if, so, while, for example
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 13.1623246493 122% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 24.0 10.4138276553 230% => Less conjunction wanted
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 19.0 24.0651302605 79% => OK
Preposition: 50.0 41.998997996 119% => OK
Nominalization: 16.0 8.3376753507 192% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2005.0 1615.20841683 124% => OK
No of words: 410.0 315.596192385 130% => OK
Chars per words: 4.89024390244 5.12529762239 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.49982852243 4.20363070211 107% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.65269104494 2.80592935109 95% => OK
Unique words: 192.0 176.041082164 109% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.468292682927 0.561755894193 83% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 630.0 506.74238477 124% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 22.0 16.0721442886 137% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 49.8180159254 49.4020404114 101% => OK
Chars per sentence: 91.1363636364 106.682146367 85% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.6363636364 20.7667163134 90% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.27272727273 7.06120827912 32% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 15.0 5.01903807615 299% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 13.0 3.9879759519 326% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.353609722165 0.244688304435 145% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.112329879994 0.084324248473 133% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.101671626249 0.0667982634062 152% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.25828416044 0.151304729494 171% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.125454128383 0.056905535591 220% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.9 13.0946893788 83% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 61.67 50.2224549098 123% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 11.3001002004 81% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.08 12.4159519038 89% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.57 8.58950901804 88% => OK
difficult_words: 79.0 78.4519038076 101% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 9.78957915832 66% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.