Do you agree or disagree with the following statement?
Because modern life is very complex, it is essential for young people to have the ability to plan and organize.
Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.
Some people say that modern life is very simple and anyone can do whatever they want and can enjoy their life easily without worrying about the future. However, I do not agree with this stance and believe that modern life is very complex and without doing the necessary plan it is difficult to become successful for the following three reasons.
First of all, without proper planning, young people can easily become demotivated. In the present time, every section of life has become competitive and due to this, it is easy to get fail and demotivated. For example, in my country, young people face excessive competition in getting admission to a renowned school or college and due to this a student can easily fail and get demotivated. But, if a student plan in advance about his or her future then he or she can easily find an alternative way to reach the goal and can easily avoid demotivation. So, proper planning is essential to avoid demotivation.
Second of all, planning and organization are necessary to get a job and become successful. For example, a student who is planning to get a job as soon as possible after graduation will fulfill job requirements before graduation. But, if students have not planned in advance then they will not be able to get the job as early as possible. By proper planning and organization, a student will learn any additional skills like software, practical knowledge, or any additional educational qualification in advance and become successful in securing the job.
Finally, without proper planning and organization, it will be difficult to reach the goal. For example, a student who wants to take higher study in the USA but has not made necessary planning to reach the goal like taking the GRE exam, TOEFL exam, and publishing some research paper in the undergrad, will feel difficult to fulfill the goal. On the other hand, if the student has made necessary planning then he will take those exams as soon as possible after graduation and will face no difficulty in reaching the ultimate goal.
For these above three reasons, I think young people should plan and organize in advance to avoid demotivation, to reach the ultimate goal, and to find a job as soon as possible.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, finally, first, however, if, second, so, then, for example, i think, first of all, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 15.1003584229 60% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 14.0 9.8082437276 143% => OK
Conjunction : 23.0 13.8261648746 166% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 11.0286738351 36% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 21.0 43.0788530466 49% => OK
Preposition: 46.0 52.1666666667 88% => OK
Nominalization: 16.0 8.0752688172 198% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1849.0 1977.66487455 93% => OK
No of words: 379.0 407.700716846 93% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.87862796834 4.8611393121 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.41224685777 4.48103885553 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.74311684509 2.67179642975 103% => OK
Unique words: 170.0 212.727598566 80% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.448548812665 0.524837075471 85% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 594.9 618.680645161 96% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.51630824373 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 9.59856630824 42% => OK
Article: 3.0 3.08781362007 97% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 3.51792114695 85% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 1.86738351254 161% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.94265232975 142% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 20.6003584229 73% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 25.0 20.1344086022 124% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 53.1662382428 48.9658058833 109% => OK
Chars per sentence: 123.266666667 100.406767564 123% => OK
Words per sentence: 25.2666666667 20.6045352989 123% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.0 5.45110844103 128% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.5376344086 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 11.8709677419 84% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.85842293907 104% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 4.88709677419 20% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.174314823228 0.236089414692 74% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0713632324737 0.076458572812 93% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0656803228979 0.0737576698707 89% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.114762192118 0.150856017488 76% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0811302212201 0.0645574589148 126% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.2 11.7677419355 121% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 46.1 58.1214874552 79% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.0 10.1575268817 128% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.32 10.9000537634 104% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.42 8.01818996416 93% => OK
difficult_words: 61.0 86.8835125448 70% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 10.002688172 110% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.0 10.0537634409 119% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.247311828 107% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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We are expecting: No. of Words: 350 while No. of Different Words: 200
Rates: 66.6666666667 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 20.0 Out of 30
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