The illustration presents an overview of the key stages involved in the production of frozen fish pies from two main raw ingredients called potatoes and fresh salmon. Overall, there are three main stages in its manufacture, from delivery to dispatch.
The whole manufacture starts with the delivery of the potatoes to the factory up to a month before the process begins, and they must be cleaned, peeled and sliced with a view to removing any undesirable dirt that remains. Once the potatoes have been prepared, it is then boiled, chilled and stored.
Meanwhile, the start of the salmon production is when it is being delivered within 12 hours, before being seasoned with lemon juice and salt and then being cooked in the steam oven. After this particular stage had finished, it then went through a manual process, not only having the salmon be removed and disposed of the skin and bones but also being inspected and well-prepared with peas and sauce by the factory workers. It’s at this particular point that the potatoes are being added, after this has been thoroughly blended together, the mixture enters the stage of being wrapped, frozen and then being stored in order to be dispatched.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, so, then, well, while
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 17.0 7.0 243% => Less to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 1.00243902439 100% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 6.8 176% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.15609756098 95% => OK
Pronoun: 11.0 5.60731707317 196% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 31.0 33.7804878049 92% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 3.97073170732 76% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1003.0 965.302439024 104% => OK
No of words: 201.0 196.424390244 102% => OK
Chars per words: 4.99004975124 4.92477711251 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.76529505866 3.73543355544 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.52846961326 2.65546596893 95% => OK
Unique words: 122.0 106.607317073 114% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.606965174129 0.547539520022 111% => OK
syllable_count: 300.6 283.868780488 106% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.45097560976 103% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 1.53170731707 196% => OK
Article: 4.0 4.33902439024 92% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 1.07073170732 280% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.482926829268 207% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 4.0 3.36585365854 119% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 7.0 8.94146341463 78% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 28.0 22.4926829268 124% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 61.346124073 43.030603864 143% => OK
Chars per sentence: 143.285714286 112.824112599 127% => OK
Words per sentence: 28.7142857143 22.9334400587 125% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.57142857143 5.23603664747 87% => OK
Paragraphs: 3.0 3.83414634146 78% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 0.0 1.69756097561 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 2.0 3.70975609756 54% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.13902439024 88% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.09268292683 98% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0466368274754 0.215688989381 22% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0267730094683 0.103423049105 26% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0362634718142 0.0843802449381 43% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0433891267981 0.15604864568 28% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0425654505845 0.0819641961636 52% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.4 13.2329268293 124% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 51.52 61.2550243902 84% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.0 10.3012195122 126% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.25 11.4140731707 107% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.19 8.06136585366 114% => OK
difficult_words: 53.0 40.7170731707 130% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 11.4329268293 96% => OK
gunning_fog: 13.2 10.9970731707 120% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 11.0658536585 117% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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It is not exactly right on the topic in the view of e-grader. Maybe there is a wrong essay topic.
Rates: 11.2359550562 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 1.0 Out of 9
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