Some people believe that traditional culture is being damaged as it is used as a tool for making money in the tourism industry. Others think it is the only way to protect culture and tradition.
Discuss both views and give your opinion.
The industry of tourism has always been regarded as an important sector in both developed and developing nations. Some people express a thought that the recent development in this industry is putting an end to traditions as it is used as a money-making machine, whereas others claim that this method is a contributing factor to preservation on traditional customs. This essay will discuss both viewpoints and give my own perspective on the matter.
On the other hand, others and I feel that this smoke-free industry should be utilized as a tool appealing cash flow to the country’s revenue. It is a fact that tourism has occupied more than 25% in Vietnam GDP growth during three consecutive years recently, so obviously no one denies the financial potentials and advantages the non-smoke industry provides. Also, only by doing so, well-known historic sites are under better protections, for authorities could allocate money from selling entrance tickets for maintenance and reinstatement.
In summary, people have differing opinions on whether or not tourism should be deployed to gain profits. I believe that the advance in this sector would reach its full potential if they are taken advantage as a money-making mechanic.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 4, column 47, Rule ID: WHETHER[7]
Message: Perhaps you can shorten this phrase to just 'whether'. It is correct though if you mean 'regardless of whether'.
Suggestion: whether
...mary, people have differing opinions on whether or not tourism should be deployed to gain prof...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, so, well, whereas, i feel, in summary, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 13.1623246493 68% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 10.4138276553 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 17.0 24.0651302605 71% => OK
Preposition: 18.0 41.998997996 43% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1036.0 1615.20841683 64% => OK
No of words: 196.0 315.596192385 62% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.28571428571 5.12529762239 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.74165738677 4.20363070211 89% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.98998745643 2.80592935109 107% => OK
Unique words: 137.0 176.041082164 78% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.698979591837 0.561755894193 124% => OK
syllable_count: 315.0 506.74238477 62% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 8.0 16.0721442886 50% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 24.0 20.2975951904 118% => OK
Sentence length SD: 54.5389768881 49.4020404114 110% => OK
Chars per sentence: 129.5 106.682146367 121% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.5 20.7667163134 118% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.875 7.06120827912 126% => OK
Paragraphs: 3.0 4.38176352705 68% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.285287328772 0.244688304435 117% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.102755606201 0.084324248473 122% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0513424252316 0.0667982634062 77% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.166923067964 0.151304729494 110% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0457317545279 0.056905535591 80% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.7 13.0946893788 120% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 47.12 50.2224549098 94% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.7 11.3001002004 112% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.7 12.4159519038 110% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.98 8.58950901804 116% => OK
difficult_words: 64.0 78.4519038076 82% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 14.5 9.78957915832 148% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.1190380762 115% => OK
text_standard: 16.0 10.7795591182 148% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum 250 words wanted.
Minimum four paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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