Health care and education are considered as one most of prominent issue. According to the essay, it is not duty of government but also individuals . However , before making any conclusions.this statement need to proper discussion and explanation.
On the one hand, healthcare and education is very necessary such as one tree who cannot grow without water and sunlight similarly , one man who cannot live without education and good health . Moreover, both are imperative key part for well business. To explain it, if employees have mammoth knowledge as well as they are fit physically and mentally then they can dedicate their work and they can help in boost the level of Business. As a result ,with this they can n help in development of country. Hence, government spend more money on health and education.
Furthermore, regarding health government provide medical facilities thus people cannot suffering of disease .They can live there better lifestyle and bright their future life also.in terms of education , in these days government provide education of each students free of cost because they can receive vast education specially through government high secondary schools. In the future time they can become good person for their country.
On the other hand, it is not responsibility of government but also individuals . If any person give information about health and education to people then they will understand especially for society . They can give information through NGO, schools and other department also which are beneficial for individuals .Apart from, if citizens pay the money for health and education thus government focus on other budgets which are very important for country development.
To conclude , I believe that it is not only responsibility of government but also individuals. Thus they with the help of government they can improve more healthcare and education level.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, furthermore, hence, however, if, moreover, regarding, second, similarly, so, then, thus, well, apart from, such as, as a result, as well as, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 13.1623246493 68% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 13.0 7.85571142285 165% => OK
Conjunction : 16.0 10.4138276553 154% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 23.0 24.0651302605 96% => OK
Preposition: 35.0 41.998997996 83% => OK
Nominalization: 26.0 8.3376753507 312% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1594.0 1615.20841683 99% => OK
No of words: 298.0 315.596192385 94% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.34899328859 5.12529762239 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.15483772266 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.92373185402 2.80592935109 104% => OK
Unique words: 160.0 176.041082164 91% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.536912751678 0.561755894193 96% => OK
syllable_count: 500.4 506.74238477 99% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 5.0 2.10420841683 238% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 12.0 4.76152304609 252% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 86.5539266713 49.4020404114 175% => OK
Chars per sentence: 106.266666667 106.682146367 100% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.8666666667 20.7667163134 96% => OK
Discourse Markers: 11.2666666667 7.06120827912 160% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 16.0 5.01903807615 319% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.4128256513 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.2332227599 0.244688304435 95% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0859166894797 0.084324248473 102% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0661116482631 0.0667982634062 99% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.140058220189 0.151304729494 93% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0782297856503 0.056905535591 137% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.7 13.0946893788 105% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 43.73 50.2224549098 87% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 11.3001002004 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.75 12.4159519038 111% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.49 8.58950901804 87% => OK
difficult_words: 55.0 78.4519038076 70% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 9.78957915832 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.7795591182 130% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.