In morden life, newspaper are becoming less popular and less significant because people now can get up-to-date news on our high-tech divices such as smart phones or laptops. From my point of views, I partly agree with this statement and I with discuss both side of this topic in this essay.
There are many reasons why I think newspaper are still popular. I feel that reading newspaper is a part of cultural in many nations. In some countries, newspaper is necessary for both young and old generations. For the elderly people it might not be really comfortable for them when using the internet
on mobile phones and they prefer the tradition news. Beside, teenager are now reading news paper because there are many professional written that can help them in their writing skills. Moreover, newpaper is also used as background in several photoshoots.
Nevertheless, for the young generation, it is actually true that newspaper has less important today. Firstly, young people have grow up in digital life and they like to use the computer because it is quick and easy to find rich of informations in a few second. Moreover, publising newspaper waste an amount
of money and use a lot of money natural resources to produce, that causes some environmental issues. Athought it just take some hours to publish, the newspaper stills be brought out slower than the internet news. Also many articals only have one side opinion.
In conclusion, it is true that online newspaper surpass those of traditional news. However, in the present world, I believe that there still some people using newspaper for many purposes.
- The pictures show the layout of a cinema in 1980 and the same cinema now Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant 78
- The pictures show the layout of a cinema in 1980 and the same cinema now Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant 67
- The diagram shows the changes that have taken place at West Park Secondary School since its construction in 1950 78
- Newspapers are less important nowadays because we have up to date access to the news on the internet To what extent do you agree or disagree 89
- The pictures show the layout of a cinema in 1980 and the same cinema now Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant 11
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 4, column 87, Rule ID: NEWS_PAPER[1]
Message: Did you mean 'newspaper'? This word sequence is usually spelled together.
Suggestion: newspaper
... news. Beside, teenager are now reading news paper because there are many professional wri...
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Line 6, column 129, Rule ID: HAVE_PART_AGREEMENT[1]
Message: Use past participle here: 'grown'.
Suggestion: grown
...rtant today. Firstly, young people have grow up in digital life and they like to use...
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Line 6, column 250, Rule ID: MANY_NN[1]
Message: Possible agreement error. The noun second seems to be countable; consider using: 'few seconds'.
Suggestion: few seconds
... easy to find rich of informations in a few second. Moreover, publising newspaper waste an...
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Line 7, column 214, Rule ID: SENT_START_CONJUNCTIVE_LINKING_ADVERB_COMMA[1]
Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Also,
...ught out slower than the internet news. Also many articals only have one side opinio...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
actually, also, first, firstly, however, if, moreover, nevertheless, really, second, so, still, i feel, i think, in conclusion, such as, it is true
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 7.85571142285 38% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 27.0 24.0651302605 112% => OK
Preposition: 31.0 41.998997996 74% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 8.3376753507 36% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1350.0 1615.20841683 84% => OK
No of words: 269.0 315.596192385 85% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.01858736059 5.12529762239 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.0498419064 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.64543528149 2.80592935109 94% => OK
Unique words: 158.0 176.041082164 90% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.587360594796 0.561755894193 105% => OK
syllable_count: 421.2 506.74238477 83% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.2975951904 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 37.3202357978 49.4020404114 76% => OK
Chars per sentence: 90.0 106.682146367 84% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.9333333333 20.7667163134 86% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.8 7.06120827912 139% => OK
Paragraphs: 6.0 4.38176352705 137% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 4.0 5.01903807615 80% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 3.4128256513 176% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.20994058517 0.244688304435 86% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0662948738905 0.084324248473 79% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.047387808846 0.0667982634062 71% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.103369723328 0.151304729494 68% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0368004916065 0.056905535591 65% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.2 13.0946893788 86% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 54.22 50.2224549098 108% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 11.3001002004 88% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.54 12.4159519038 93% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.0 8.58950901804 93% => OK
difficult_words: 60.0 78.4519038076 76% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.1190380762 87% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.7795591182 74% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum five paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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