Some people think that schools should involve students in school management. Do you agree or disagree with this idea? Give reasons for your answer.
In the modern world, many people are willing to encourage the students to take part in the school management. In this regard, although many citizens are not reckoned to think that this a good idea, others feel that these kinds of methods will be beneficial for the pupils as well as for the teachers. Personally, I believe that if they are involved in administrative works, they can get to know about the situation in the school. Accordingly, they can bring new changes to the system.
On the one hand, it is true that the main advantage of involving the pupils in management is the experience, as during the process, students can gain knowledge about the leadership, communication and collaboration with other people. Furthermore, the second advantage of this method is personal growth, as pupils can expand their horizons and evolve the interpersonal skills. To illustrate, many students are supposed to work with other people, which is essential for their development of soft skills, such as communication and co-operation with other individuals.
On the other hand, some people are keen to think that educational organizations should not use this methodology, as the children cannot focus on the studying process because of their duties. Moreover, there are can occur minor conflicts because of misunderstanding. For example, it is clear that there are should be an election for the selection of authority among the children. Consequently, this process can be a source of the conflict, as some children are willing to elect their candidate, while other people are keen to vote for other candidates.
In conclusion, although many people are reckoned to think that the secondary school should not involve the learners in the management, personally, I believe that this methodology is a viable option for the solving some internal problems, such as helping to the teachers, printing some photos for the holidays and developing learners’ soft skills
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
accordingly, consequently, furthermore, if, moreover, second, so, well, while, as for, for example, in conclusion, such as, as well as, it is true, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 19.0 13.1623246493 144% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 7.85571142285 140% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 10.4138276553 38% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 26.0 24.0651302605 108% => OK
Preposition: 38.0 41.998997996 90% => OK
Nominalization: 12.0 8.3376753507 144% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1646.0 1615.20841683 102% => OK
No of words: 315.0 315.596192385 100% => OK
Chars per words: 5.2253968254 5.12529762239 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.21286593061 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.00367457834 2.80592935109 107% => OK
Unique words: 159.0 176.041082164 90% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.504761904762 0.561755894193 90% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 504.9 506.74238477 100% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 7.0 2.10420841683 333% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 26.0 20.2975951904 128% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 75.1547939626 49.4020404114 152% => OK
Chars per sentence: 137.166666667 106.682146367 129% => OK
Words per sentence: 26.25 20.7667163134 126% => OK
Discourse Markers: 13.75 7.06120827912 195% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.276545725229 0.244688304435 113% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0956218888238 0.084324248473 113% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0621989429564 0.0667982634062 93% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.170738391074 0.151304729494 113% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0440727567891 0.056905535591 77% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.3 13.0946893788 124% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 45.09 50.2224549098 90% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.4 11.3001002004 119% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.35 12.4159519038 108% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.24 8.58950901804 108% => OK
difficult_words: 86.0 78.4519038076 110% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.4 10.1190380762 123% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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