A serious problems, affecting countries right across the globe is the lack of water for drinking, washing and other household uses.
Why do many countries face water shortages, and what could be done to alleviate the problems?
These days, the lack of sufficient water is an increasing problem which a lot of countries have to deal with. Although the local authorities invested numerous money in order to find out the way to minimize this situation, the water resources is decreased in size. This essay will examine some of these problems in detail and then propose some solutions.
First of all, territorial location is a main element that effects the water storage of the country. Take Singapore as an example, due to the geographical location which insufficient water for the whole citizen, they have to spend an extortionate price in annual so as to buy water from Malaysia. To tackle this problem, the government focuses on more effort on make sea water into drinkable water.
Another problem is that a great deal of quantity of water is wasted by the lack of residential unconsciousness. This is because, to prepare a meal, people use water to clarify fruit or vegetable without turn water tap off. It leads to the water storage is becoming worsen. The way forward must be bringing in some saving approaches of water consumption. In Japan, for example, scientists launch a new kind of toilet which use hand washing water to wash toilet after using.
In conclusion, although it is clear that numerous countries have to cope with the lack of water resource, it is undoubtedly possible to start to solve these issues and improve the standard of water resources. Governments and must be take the lead in dealing with these problems.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 262, Rule ID: SO_AS_TO[1]
Message: Use simply 'to'
Suggestion: to
...o spend an extortionate price in annual so as to buy water from Malaysia. To tackle this...
^^^^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, if, so, then, as to, for example, in conclusion, kind of, first of all
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 7.85571142285 38% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 10.4138276553 38% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 15.0 24.0651302605 62% => OK
Preposition: 46.0 41.998997996 110% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1254.0 1615.20841683 78% => OK
No of words: 256.0 315.596192385 81% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.8984375 5.12529762239 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.0 4.20363070211 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.7400387771 2.80592935109 98% => OK
Unique words: 146.0 176.041082164 83% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.5703125 0.561755894193 102% => OK
syllable_count: 394.2 506.74238477 78% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 44.2047415058 49.4020404114 89% => OK
Chars per sentence: 96.4615384615 106.682146367 90% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.6923076923 20.7667163134 95% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.92307692308 7.06120827912 84% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 2.0 8.67935871743 23% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.9879759519 150% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.4128256513 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.277654132753 0.244688304435 113% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.103718885872 0.084324248473 123% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0494765485535 0.0667982634062 74% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.171462188048 0.151304729494 113% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0425632248205 0.056905535591 75% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.5 13.0946893788 88% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 60.65 50.2224549098 121% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 11.3001002004 84% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.14 12.4159519038 90% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.59 8.58950901804 100% => OK
difficult_words: 65.0 78.4519038076 83% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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