It is commonly believed that big companies and industries should be moved away from the city to local area. In point of view, this modification has more benefits than drawbacks and both will be discussed below in the essay.
There are a variety of reasons why moving large companies and industries to regional areas is beneficial. First, this change will reduce the pollution in the city which is mainly caused by industrial wastes from companies. Industries will have ample space in the countryside to dispose of wastes, therefore, the environmental issues can be improved. Second, locating industries in the suburbs will create more jobs for people who live far from the city center so they do not have to move far distance to city anymore. Thus, this will definitely improve local people’ life quality. Consequently, large companies and industries move to rural areas have positive effects on our society as well as inhabitants.
Apart from the practical advantages expressed above, there are also some negative aspects that should be carefully considered. One problem is that the unemployment in urban areas will increase because of the lack of jobs. When the industries and businesses move away, the workers who live in the city center will become unemployed and it will be difficult for them to look for another jobs. Another issue is the infrastructure such as supplies of water, electricity and internet to run the industries. For instance, if there is no internet connection, it will be very tough to operate companies effectively and as a result, the profit of the companies will fall.
In conclusion, though aware of some possible risks of shifting industries and companies to rural areas, I strongly believe that the advantages outweigh the disadvantages.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, consequently, first, if, look, second, so, therefore, thus, well, apart from, for instance, in conclusion, such as, as a result, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 13.1623246493 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 13.0 7.85571142285 165% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 14.0 24.0651302605 58% => OK
Preposition: 35.0 41.998997996 83% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1493.0 1615.20841683 92% => OK
No of words: 288.0 315.596192385 91% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.18402777778 5.12529762239 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.11953428781 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.86363620706 2.80592935109 102% => OK
Unique words: 163.0 176.041082164 93% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.565972222222 0.561755894193 101% => OK
syllable_count: 479.7 506.74238477 95% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 30.0907640586 49.4020404114 61% => OK
Chars per sentence: 106.642857143 106.682146367 100% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.5714285714 20.7667163134 99% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.3571428571 7.06120827912 147% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.281457506645 0.244688304435 115% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.100267638522 0.084324248473 119% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0732270377771 0.0667982634062 110% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.164244888531 0.151304729494 109% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0427541040713 0.056905535591 75% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.3 13.0946893788 102% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 42.72 50.2224549098 85% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 11.3001002004 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.76 12.4159519038 103% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.23 8.58950901804 107% => OK
difficult_words: 84.0 78.4519038076 107% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.7795591182 121% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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