In contemporary society, traffic accidents have always been a major concern to the society as a whole, since they are responsible for million of deaths and injuries per year. In order to tackle this problem, some individuals are suggesting that a legislation should be imposed that compel people to have their driving test retaken every 5 years. In my opinion, this idea certainly would address the issue, however, at the same time begetting potential traffic congestion.
There is no denying that forcing people to take a driving exam every half a decade does not only reduce the amount of accidents but also can raise the awareness of citizens towards traffic laws , therefore, contribute greatly to safer roads. People tend to forget rules and skills that they have learnt for driving as time passes. Manifold accidents happened due to neither the driver’s ignorance of signs nor his unskilfulness in dealing with emergency circumstances. Statistics have underlined that up to 50% of accidents in Vietnam would not have happened if the driver does not mistake the brake and the accelerator pedal. Skills that seems so simple can be crucially important in some cases, albeit most people would neglect them. With this policy, people will be reminded of many essential traffic regulations, hence increasing people consciousness for the safety of the society and their own.
However, some downsides of this solution cannot be disregarded. As people will most likely to have spare time during the summer, huge waves of people will take the driving test then. That leads to overcrowding in numerous roads, since they need places to practice and conduct the exams. As a consequence, traffic congestions and bottlenecks are inevitable. To make matter worse, with the rise in vehicular usage, the amount of carbon dioxide emissions will increase remarkably, eventually being detrimental to the atmosphere and the environment.
In the light of aforementioned facts, one can conclude that although it is predicted that this idea can definitely help attack the problem, it simultaneously attributes to traffic jams and air pollution, which cannot be neglect by both the government and individuals.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 135, Rule ID: NODT_DOZEN[1]
Message: Use simply: 'a million'.
Suggestion: a million
...a whole, since they are responsible for million of deaths and injuries per year. In ord...
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Line 1, column 347, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
...eir driving test retaken every 5 years. In my opinion, this idea certainly would a...
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Line 3, column 194, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
...areness of citizens towards traffic laws , therefore, contribute greatly to safer ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, hence, however, if, so, then, therefore, in my opinion, in some cases
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 15.0 7.85571142285 191% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 7.30460921844 137% => OK
Pronoun: 24.0 24.0651302605 100% => OK
Preposition: 43.0 41.998997996 102% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1852.0 1615.20841683 115% => OK
No of words: 349.0 315.596192385 111% => OK
Chars per words: 5.30659025788 5.12529762239 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.32221490584 4.20363070211 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.86050659135 2.80592935109 102% => OK
Unique words: 204.0 176.041082164 116% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.58452722063 0.561755894193 104% => OK
syllable_count: 577.8 506.74238477 114% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 10.0 4.76152304609 210% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 23.0 20.2975951904 113% => OK
Sentence length SD: 56.5271223003 49.4020404114 114% => OK
Chars per sentence: 123.466666667 106.682146367 116% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.2666666667 20.7667163134 112% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.33333333333 7.06120827912 76% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.9879759519 150% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.284990029617 0.244688304435 116% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0918343225365 0.084324248473 109% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0946390897562 0.0667982634062 142% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.162495168718 0.151304729494 107% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0756585961908 0.056905535591 133% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.2 13.0946893788 116% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 39.67 50.2224549098 79% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.4 11.3001002004 119% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.81 12.4159519038 111% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.12 8.58950901804 106% => OK
difficult_words: 96.0 78.4519038076 122% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 13.5 9.78957915832 138% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.1190380762 111% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.7795591182 130% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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