Nowadays animal experiments are widely used to develop new medicines and to test the safety of other products. Some people argue that these experiments should be banned because it is morally wrong to cause animals to suffer.
To what extent do you agree or disagree?
These days, animals are being used as test subjects in order to determine the quality of new medicines, cosmetics, etc. It is said to be needed before humans use those medical products. However, in my perspective, I partially disagree and believe these terrifying experiments should be limited as much as possible.
On the one hand, using animals for medical experiments is needed to test their safety. Releasing products without testing may cause many problems for society when there is no certainty that they are applicable for humans. Meanwhile, there are some species that have nearly similar genes, cell structures, and physiology as humans. In order to guarantee the safety of the products, scientists have to use those species as laboratory animals. Even though there is no animal that is the same as a human but it is safer if a new medicine has been through stages of tests before being reached by the consumers.
On the other hand, laboratory animals are being used wrongly when some enterprises use them for non-medical purposes such as cosmetics. Before those makeup products are used by the consumers, obviously, they have been tested on animals. Each year, tons of animals, espeacially rabbits, are found harmed or dead due to the experiments. Those rabbits are still alive have to live with their pains forever. They are being treated in cruel and unethical ways.
In conclusion, I believe that we have to establish a limitation on animals expriments in the laboratory or expriment on cell structures instead of wholes animals. It may be a neccessary evil but animals need to have their respects.
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Suggestion:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, however, if, may, so, still, while, in conclusion, such as, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 23.0 13.1623246493 175% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 24.0 24.0651302605 100% => OK
Preposition: 33.0 41.998997996 79% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 8.3376753507 24% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1356.0 1615.20841683 84% => OK
No of words: 267.0 315.596192385 85% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.07865168539 5.12529762239 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.04229324003 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.7374613567 2.80592935109 98% => OK
Unique words: 151.0 176.041082164 86% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.565543071161 0.561755894193 101% => OK
syllable_count: 441.0 506.74238477 87% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 5.43587174349 147% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.2975951904 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 33.5667825221 49.4020404114 68% => OK
Chars per sentence: 90.4 106.682146367 85% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.8 20.7667163134 86% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.46666666667 7.06120827912 77% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.9879759519 150% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.259264924075 0.244688304435 106% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0864397062908 0.084324248473 103% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0637892941424 0.0667982634062 95% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.161575091244 0.151304729494 107% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0536496368783 0.056905535591 94% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.4 13.0946893788 87% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 45.76 50.2224549098 91% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 11.3001002004 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.89 12.4159519038 96% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.8 8.58950901804 102% => OK
difficult_words: 73.0 78.4519038076 93% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.1190380762 87% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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