New technologies have changed the way children spend their free time. Do the advantages outweigh the disadvantages
It is true that our society is living in technological age, therefore, its influence on the pastime of children is huge. In my view, the drawbacks of this phenomenon are outweighed by its advantages. This essay will discuss both views in the following paragraph.
On the one hand, we cannot deny the fact that youngsters gain important knowledge in this age, hence, deep work and studying requires full concentration. However, now children are absorbed in social networking sites, which serve as a source of entertainment for them. In other words, usually study process stopped due to social media applications which a used in order to procrastinate. For example, the young people prefer using Instagram, Tik-Tok, Snapchart rather than reading books, it will have detrimental effect on children’s future life. Moreover, game addiction is acute problem of our society. Young generation spends their precious time on gaming and entertaining games. For instance, the most popular game is the Clash of Cans, many children, even adults are addicted to this game.
On the flip side, there are also undeniable advantages. First of all children has easy access to educational material. To clarify, the Internet is full of sites where plethora of data about certain subject, everyone can download and use it. As an example, Quora and Wikipedia the best sites for students. Besides, nowadays students can learn about everything without extra charge. That is, brilliant programmers have created applications that can help students get free video tutorials. Hence, owing to the Internet, children can receive a complimentary education from the comfort of their homes. To exemplify, it was reported that Youtube and Spotify the best educational platforms.
In conclusion, despite some adverse effects of gadgets on children, influence of technological devises quite beneficial because of unlimited access to information about education and free video lessens.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, first, hence, however, if, moreover, so, therefore, for example, for instance, in conclusion, first of all, in my view, in other words, it is true
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 10.4138276553 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 22.0 24.0651302605 91% => OK
Preposition: 41.0 41.998997996 98% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 8.3376753507 120% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1651.0 1615.20841683 102% => OK
No of words: 303.0 315.596192385 96% => OK
Chars per words: 5.44884488449 5.12529762239 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.17215713816 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.91911159727 2.80592935109 104% => OK
Unique words: 198.0 176.041082164 112% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.653465346535 0.561755894193 116% => OK
syllable_count: 514.8 506.74238477 102% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 9.0 4.76152304609 189% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 19.0 16.0721442886 118% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 20.2975951904 74% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 38.6078372478 49.4020404114 78% => OK
Chars per sentence: 86.8947368421 106.682146367 81% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.9473684211 20.7667163134 77% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.47368421053 7.06120827912 120% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 14.0 8.67935871743 161% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.150572805711 0.244688304435 62% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0391999585368 0.084324248473 46% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0445658660863 0.0667982634062 67% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0837856385046 0.151304729494 55% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0107440321019 0.056905535591 19% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.2 13.0946893788 93% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 47.79 50.2224549098 95% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 11.3001002004 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.03 12.4159519038 113% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.33 8.58950901804 109% => OK
difficult_words: 95.0 78.4519038076 121% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 10.1190380762 79% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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